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The color palette of the world has changed. Wispy painters brush clouds line a clear calm sky. The day is dry and cold, powdery snow starts to fall. Flowers have ceased budding and spilling over in the garden; yet the passion, fragrant, rosebud cherry and amber honeysuckle vine, twines round the wooden arbor, inviting the few scarce bees to come to its nectar. Forbearance wooden starlings and mourning doves move on with their singing and coo-OO-oo throughout the day. Warm breath onto the cold window, a traced note of love. 10/1/2023

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Date: 11/10/2023 9:30:00 AM
Such a beautiful nature poem! Loved reading it!
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Date: 11/2/2023 6:04:00 PM
Nature beauty ..so well presented, power of poetry in your thoughtful mind
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Date: 10/11/2023 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Have a blessed day....................
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Date: 10/10/2023 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations on a win
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Date: 10/9/2023 1:01:00 PM
A lovely poem that was fitting for the theme.. Great verses through out.. Thank you for writing and congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 10/6/2023 9:45:00 PM
Such a poetic and beautiful way to welcome the changing season, Eve. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 10/6/2023 5:28:00 AM
"powdery snow starts to fall", "passion, fragrant, rosebud cherry and amber honeysuckle vine, twines round the wooden arbor" Wow, this is such a thoughtful and intriguing poem dear, even the title itself is so deep "The color palette of the world has changed" Ah so evocative and heartfelt are these lines.. I absolutely loved reading this poem and it's truly a Fav.. A journey you've described with your whimsical words!
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Date: 10/2/2023 10:53:00 AM
A brilliant showing of how the death of one season leads to the birth of another.
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Date: 10/2/2023 7:41:00 AM
This left my heart full! The way you’ve painted imagery in such a descriptive manner is truly impressive and moving. I love the opening lines as well as how you’ve written “ Flowers have ceased bud“… so good! “ seamless alliterations and depth . Fave for me
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Date: 10/2/2023 5:19:00 AM
Beautiful hues of the changing season you convey, Eve. I could feel the onset of winter's reign as I read your poem. Lovely ending line.
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Date: 10/2/2023 1:02:00 AM
Gorgeous poem. It is a pity man is disturbing the environment. Yet what's left is so alluring. A fave. Hugs, my friend.
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Date: 10/2/2023 12:07:00 AM
A good description of the changing seasons. A good poem. Well done.
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Date: 10/1/2023 9:25:00 PM
you paint the change in season so vividly the imagery is so wonderful Eve, you truly are an artist with both words and a brush:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/1/2023 9:26:00 PM
Awe, thank you. But, you are as well an artist with words.

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