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The Colliery

Summer days in a mining town Lunch box sitting by the kitchen door Whistle blows at the Colliery Time for work, all my muscles sore Long day’s work for little pay No complaints, we’re doing fine Wednesday, got a half day off Have a few beers, forget the mine Down inside that mine we give it a go No panic here, no need to be hurrying Mice are moving kind of slow I’ll start to panic if I see them scurrying The Colliery overshadows the town Sometimes causes a bit of strife A sense of pride putting that hammer down For a miner it’s a way of life Wife stays home to raise the kids When that alarm goes off sometimes she’ll cry Town waits quietly to hear the news There’s a self-respect that money can’t buy A constant struggle from day to day Months pass quickly and the bills come due Most times they are larger than the pay But somehow, Thank God, we make it through Though the times are hard trying to make ends meet We get a perspective of what’s important in life Our riches aren’t measured in the material things They are children, good neighbors and a loving wife There is a brotherhood within the town A sense of belonging, a sense of pride The colliery may have been shut down But the spirit of the miner has never died. Tamaqua, Pa. USA in the 50s.

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Date: 4/22/2009 9:06:00 AM
I applaud the subject of this poem ... one half the world does not know how the other half lives ... human life is taken for granted daily, and this is our tragedy. This is a profound write from within borders of personal experience ... three cheers for it!
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Date: 4/14/2009 2:31:00 PM
beautiful poetry.... beautiful remembering God he such an influence and escape goat for many, enjoyed alot and thank you for your comments as well.
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Date: 4/12/2009 4:12:00 AM
...forgot to mention - magnificent rhyming!
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Date: 4/12/2009 4:11:00 AM
...are you familiar with Sting's song 'We Work The Black Seam?'
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Date: 4/12/2009 4:07:00 AM
Carbon 14... a marvelous description of the woes and the pride of the miners, condemned to darkness and danger. Brilliant detail and imagery! Best wishes, Keith (PS shades of Eliot and Lawrence.)
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Date: 4/11/2009 9:04:00 AM
Beautiful narrative, Vince. There is a universal pride of this profession, so much danger and simplicity at the same time. Great work. Love, iolanda
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Date: 4/9/2009 12:51:00 PM
I've run out of adjectives with this one, Vince!! Spectacular, superb, special, great rhythm and a wonderful tribute to a dying way of life!! Have to add it to my favorites ...
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Date: 4/5/2009 7:57:00 AM
yes, so very powerful this poem...it speaks of pride... I was working once, in a northern town in Canada where there were many mines, and I have seen this pride etched upon many a face, of people who value family, life... more than worldly, material things... Constance
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Date: 4/2/2009 10:26:00 PM
A wonderfully inspiring masterpiece that pays tribute to people who work hard and know what is really important in life. Great work, Keith!
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Date: 4/2/2009 9:09:00 PM
very powerful write. nicely done- love and peace:james
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Date: 4/2/2009 12:33:00 AM
The infallable spirit of the American people will always rise above adversity. Great writing, Vince. Lainie
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Date: 4/2/2009 12:32:00 AM
Reminds me of the 'Big John ' song Vince.Nice nostalgic writing good to read.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words
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Date: 4/1/2009 9:50:00 PM
Vince i commend you on how you captured the heart & soul of not just the miners but the entire town - This was excellently written and subtly profound - the feeling & pride just flows from beginning to end - God Bless you Vince, MJ
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Date: 4/1/2009 11:00:00 AM
Wonderful write above, America I believe still has working mines, though there strip mines mostly, always out for the fast buck. Yet, I rather have a machine "hoe" than a man. I've been in many a mine, facinated by them. I'll try to write you a slate mine in England.Thanks for reading me Vince! May as well travel for joyous insperation rather than shut in sorrow aye?
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Date: 4/1/2009 10:23:00 AM
a wonderful writing! this story really allows us to know their lives! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/31/2009 9:05:00 PM
Thank you for letting me see this through a miner's eyes. Wonderful write..Some really nice rhyming too. BG
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Date: 3/31/2009 4:43:00 PM
An inspiring write we live in a mining village. I worked six months down the mines and I didn't like it at all. My respect to you my friend. Leon
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Date: 3/31/2009 2:06:00 PM
Bless the hard working men and the families that endure and pull together under difficult circumstances. A wonderful tribute to a way of life that has seen generation after generation struggle, but done with dignity.
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Date: 3/31/2009 11:09:00 AM
this has power and meaning very well written
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Date: 3/31/2009 11:05:00 AM
"Hello My Blessed & Gifted Dear Young Friend Vincent Suzadail Jr. & All of Your Loves!":) I hope that Your lives have been going wonderfully for You all!?:) And, as usual, I enjoyed another one of Your well written and passion filled stories here!:) I truly love "Brotherhoods!"~They always seem to be stronger, the more dangerous to themselves their careers are!!!:)~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' John!!!"~Have A Very Beautiful Day~Bye!:)
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Date: 3/31/2009 10:10:00 AM
Wonderful Norritive on mines, we saw the brotherhood not so long ago when one caved in and killed some of the miners, I'm sure they would be honored by this tribute to the miners life. Well said. Judy Riley
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Date: 3/31/2009 10:01:00 AM
Beautiful write filled with emotion. A wonderful tribute to the hard working miners. Smiles from Lolita
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