The City Market

~City Market~

The smell of popcorn, burned hot dogs, and sweat invaded his nostrils as Jason pushed his way down Fuller Street. Past vegetable carts, homemade pie stands, and the booth with carved wooden bears holding ‘Welcome signs’. He weaved around baby strollers and people who thought it a good idea to bring their dogs for a walk through the shoulder-to-shoulder traffic. He entered through the back of the jewelry stand and sat down at the table.
“How’d we do?” Sheila asked.
“Pretty good shopping day,” he told his girlfriend as he emptied the wallets and watches from his pockets. 

The hand of a friend
Can wear the glove of kindness
Evil wears a mask
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Nicholsen Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 11:20 PM
lovely write
Brotherton Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 6:33 PM
Thanks for your kind words.
Wolf Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 8:10 PM
The Artful Dodger comes to Fuller Street...
Brotherton Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 6:36 PM
My luck, if I tried pickpocketing, I'd only get a linty peppermint candy and a used Kleenex.
Baker Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 5:50 PM
Find storytelling, Jerry. The haiku was quite the unexpected twist. Very engaging and a good read my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Baker Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 3:16 PM
Amazing first try, Jerry. I think it's a match my friend. Write On! Bill
Brotherton Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 7:21 PM
Thank you, Bill. This was my first attempt at haiku and haibun.
Bauer Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 2:31 PM
Well done, Jerry! You sure fooled me!
Brotherton Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 6:37 PM
Thanks, Ilene.
Lane Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 8:03 AM
His method of shopping by sleight of hand is evil. Well written Haibun, Jerry.
Brotherton Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 7:18 PM
Thank you, Lin. This was my first attempt.
M  Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 7:57 AM
Ha didn't expect that ending Jerry….very creative ,clever poem and message! Great poem…Debx
Brotherton Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 7:17 PM
Thanks, Deb, you know I'm always looking for the bad side of humanity.
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