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The City Market

~City Market~ The smell of popcorn, burned hot dogs, and sweat invaded his nostrils as Jason pushed his way down Fuller Street. Past vegetable carts, homemade pie stands, and the booth with carved wooden bears holding ‘Welcome signs’. He weaved around baby strollers and people who thought it a good idea to bring their dogs for a walk through the shoulder-to-shoulder traffic. He entered through the back of the jewelry stand and sat down at the table. “How’d we do?” Sheila asked. “Pretty good shopping day,” he told his girlfriend as he emptied the wallets and watches from his pockets. The hand of a friend Can wear the glove of kindness Evil wears a mask

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 12/4/2023 11:20:00 PM
lovely write
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/5/2023 6:33:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words.
Date: 12/4/2023 8:10:00 PM
The Artful Dodger comes to Fuller Street...
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/5/2023 6:36:00 PM
My luck, if I tried pickpocketing, I'd only get a linty peppermint candy and a used Kleenex.
Date: 12/4/2023 5:50:00 PM
Find storytelling, Jerry. The haiku was quite the unexpected twist. Very engaging and a good read my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Bill Baker
Date: 12/5/2023 3:16:00 PM
Amazing first try, Jerry. I think it's a match my friend. Write On! Bill
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/4/2023 7:21:00 PM
Thank you, Bill. This was my first attempt at haiku and haibun.
Date: 12/4/2023 2:31:00 PM
Well done, Jerry! You sure fooled me!
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/5/2023 6:37:00 PM
Thanks, Ilene.
Date: 12/4/2023 10:33:00 AM
oh, I do like this poem, Jerry. At first I thought I was reading about a lovely day at the city market only to discover a petty thief was amongst the patrons. Well crafted, Jerry. have a splendid day, Sara
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/4/2023 7:19:00 PM
Thak you Sara. Same to you.
Date: 12/4/2023 8:03:00 AM
His method of shopping by sleight of hand is evil. Well written Haibun, Jerry.
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/4/2023 7:18:00 PM
Thank you, Lin. This was my first attempt.
Date: 12/4/2023 7:57:00 AM
Ha didn't expect that ending Jerry….very creative ,clever poem and message! Great poem…Debx
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/4/2023 7:17:00 PM
Thanks, Deb, you know I'm always looking for the bad side of humanity.
Date: 12/4/2023 7:02:00 AM
Great twist Jerry. Speaking of Twist...
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/4/2023 7:16:00 PM
Thanks Tom

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