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The Chill of Autumn

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The chill of Autumn’s months begins to be felt. A gaggle of snow-white geese fly down south. How delightful to hear the Fall’s sounds Of finches and red breasted robins flying around. A gaggle of snow-white geese fly down south. How delightful to wander in the green vast vales Of finches and red breasted robins flying around, And admiring blooming celosia, so stunning to look at. How delightful to wander in the green vast vales The green ferns thrive from recent downpours, And admiring blooming celosia, so stunning to look at. Autumn will always be a full of vivid memories for me. The green ferns thrive from recent downpours, How delightful to hear the Fall’s sounds Autumn will always be a full of vivid memories for me. The chill of Autumn’s months begins to be felt. 6 September 2022

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Date: 10/21/2022 8:57:00 PM
a true song of worshiping nature in autumn, spectacular descent of the landscape.... congratulations dear friend, salute alkas
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Date: 9/14/2022 5:12:00 AM
The Robin is my favourite, it stays with us year round, and resides in our garden.
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Date: 9/8/2022 11:58:00 PM
A delight to read!
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Date: 9/8/2022 3:12:00 PM
Victor, this portrait of autumn is keen in its utterly precise images. I can feel, see, hear and almost taste autumn! Thank you for this walk through the season. Blessings!
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Date: 9/8/2022 1:21:00 PM
Nicely done Victor! Linda
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Date: 9/7/2022 5:50:00 PM
You paint a vivid picture of autumn, Victor.
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Date: 9/7/2022 3:31:00 PM
Autumn painting my friend.
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Date: 9/7/2022 3:07:00 PM
That chill can feel nice and cool to the touch, Victor, after a hot summer its a welcome sight, nicely penned, thank you for sharing your talent :)
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Date: 9/7/2022 4:38:00 AM
I like the birds and plants of this Pantoum. It flows seamlessly. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my pages. I looked up coleus and it said there are several dwarf species that would tolerate the sun, but it did not say salty conditions. The plant is propagated by cuttings and not from seed though. Sara
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Date: 9/7/2022 3:37:00 AM
Hi dear friend, your beautiful pantoum on autumn is vibrant with colors, flowersand the gaggle of geese. The finches and red breasted robins add to its beauty ! I also feel the sweet chill of autumn....
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Date: 9/7/2022 2:51:00 AM
Hello Victor. Hi. You once told me it did not matter what you wrote and that you didn't think much of your own work. Just look at this one entry before us written and executed by you. If this isn't poetry than my name isn't Skywatcher. You truly have always remained a beautiful poet and writer with imagery and the ability to place the reader within any scene moment or situation. I can ramble on but I will leave you with this for your entry is pausing. Love and Blessings always...
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Date: 9/7/2022 2:05:00 AM
Beautiful Imagery said here Victor, you do a wonderful job with nature. Really enjoyed reading. Blessings my friend...
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Date: 9/7/2022 12:23:00 AM
You turn this form of poetry, into visual art, it is so well written.
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Date: 9/6/2022 10:55:00 PM
A very lovely poem Victor! I can't wait till Autumn's here
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Date: 9/6/2022 10:43:00 PM
Lovely poem Victor…..Debx
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Date: 9/6/2022 7:13:00 PM
A very nice depiction of autumn scenery Victor..
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Date: 9/6/2022 5:04:00 PM
Nice form, Victor. I enjoyed reading your thoughts on Autumn. The imagery was excellent my friend. Have a great week! Bill
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Date: 9/6/2022 3:51:00 PM
It takes a certain amount of skill to create a great pantoum, and this is an example of such a poem. Sorry to be so late commenting. Life is not easy right now, but I will try to catch up to those who commented on my four most recent poems.
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Date: 9/6/2022 2:17:00 PM
Colors of autumn and frolic of birds--a delightful combo to behold. Charming depiction of fall-- in this lovely poem you convey, Victor.
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Date: 9/6/2022 12:39:00 PM
This poem is filled with beauty and vibrant scenes, Victor. It's got me looking forward to autumn. Have a great day, Evelyn :)
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Date: 9/6/2022 10:54:00 AM
Hello Victor,yes autumn has begun. There is a chill in the air now in the morning. It already begun. Enjoy your day my friend.
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