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The Call of the Shore

There are times in my life, in my soul, that the sea calls and I must answer. I need to see the horizon fade into the blue, hear the sounds of the surf and the cry of the gull. There is a connection there, forged, I think, in the time of creation. With my feet in the surf I feel a sense of peace, as if somehow I’ve come home. Home to the whale’s spout, the salt on my tongue, the knowledge that I am part of something bigger than can be known. There are times in my life, in my soul, that the sea calls and I must answer.... 1/30/16

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Date: 2/21/2016 1:54:00 AM
Lovely piece. I can absolutely identify with the thoughts Barbara - the coast is like a magnet and I wish I was able to visit it more frequently. I especially like the rocky shores where small pools contain so many colourful flora and fauna and interesting activity can be observed. `Best wishes, Dave
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Date: 2/10/2016 1:27:00 PM
Love the sea also, Barbara. Think everyone wants to be a part of something larger than herself or himself. And thanks for visiting my site!
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Date: 2/2/2016 12:08:00 AM
What a coincidence, Barbara, this is so reminiscent of Craig Cornish's latest offering- how we all feel that urge to go to the seashore. A lovely piece, much enjoyed. Viv x
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 2/2/2016 11:08:00 AM
Thank you Viv, glad you enjoyed it. BG
Date: 1/30/2016 9:14:00 PM
Um-hmmm!!! Nice; just right. I know that inside me, and now it looks and smells and feels even more exquisite, because someone else I've never met has said so. Beautiful piece, peace. Gerald
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/31/2016 2:22:00 PM
What a lovely comment. Thank You..BG
Date: 1/30/2016 6:40:00 PM
I understand your call as I live near the sea, and yes the salt air is strong..as the sense of smallness is when you face the sea.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/31/2016 2:23:00 PM
I envy you living near ;the sea..Its a couple of hrs from me and I just don't get there as often as I need to. Thank you for stopping by. BG
Date: 1/30/2016 4:59:00 PM
I found this enchanting, Barbara. I wish you well in this contest.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/30/2016 5:00:00 PM
if you've written it for a contest~lol

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