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The Burning Ash

The burning ash Took a painful picture of you The burning ash Lit the image on fire to wash Cleansing the burnt soul through and through Releasing pain through ash accrued The burning ash Russell Sivey The word I chose is (A)......for Ash Entrant into Nette Onclaud's "ALPHABETS OF RONDELET" contest 2/18/2012

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Robert Pettit

Date: 2/21/2012 12:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Russell. Nette apparently liked this one.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2012 4:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine win, Russell. Very well done.

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/20/2012 2:25:00 PM

Russell, creative and well thought out. Well done, My friend. Congrats on making the winners list in Nette's contest...................S.Ronthorpe

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/20/2012 12:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in ~Nette's~ "Alphabets Of Rondelet" contest Russell. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/20/2012 11:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your rondelet and win. Love, Joyce

Kash Poet

Date: 2/20/2012 10:57:00 AM

Congratulations Russell on your win with this beautiful Rondelet.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/20/2012 9:46:00 AM

congrats Russell on a huge win for this captivating entry luv... another awesome write..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/20/2012 4:40:00 AM

this is a smokin' piece, russel... congrats on your fine win in my contest! :) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2012 7:11:00 PM

Good job with the form, Russell. I think a lot of us chose that word ASH. The ASHES have it!!

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 2/18/2012 6:36:00 PM

Well done Russell- a release, : )

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/18/2012 5:06:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/18/2012 4:32:00 PM

Bravo Russell, good luck in contest! - oxox Anne-Lise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/18/2012 2:56:00 PM

an amazig portrait of the word ash Russell.. excellent visual blending ..good luck in the contest luv.. can u please walk me thru how to bold lines to post a poem.. I have so tried and it never works for me..