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The Barn Owl

 
~*~ I am one of nine babies born in a farmer's barn, The barn is cozy and even has an owl door; My birth nest so warm with stuff like grandma's yarn, To keep us fed- into the dark mom will soar. The barn is cozy and even has an owl door, My perfect ears, heard the farmer call us owls; To keep us fed- into the dark mom will soar, While waiting for food I do whistles and howls. My perfect ears, heard the farmer call us owls, Oh, we are the only owl with a heart-shaped face; While waiting for food I do whistles and howls, Today I went hunting- had my own prey to chase. Oh, we are the only owl with a heart-shaped face, Felt the urge to leave today- on my vibrant wings; Today I went hunting- had my own prey to chase, I flew to a church steeple- made a nest of odd things. Felt the urge to leave today- on my vibrant wings, My birth nest so warm with stuff like grandma's yarn; I flew to a church steeple- made a nest of odd things, I am one of nine babies born in a farmer's barn. _______________________ January 31, 2016 Pantoum/Personification/The Barn Owl Copyright Protected, ID 16-750-702-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Owls Personification, Sponsor, Eve Roper Second Place
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Lariviere Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Fantastic, such descriptive beauty.
La France Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 9:04 PM
Etienne, thanks for visiting my owl poem, and for the beauty !
A   Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 12:42 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your "Owls Personification form WIN." Always ~LINDA~
La France Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 1:58 AM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations ~
A. Sharma Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 1:22 AM
Wonderful write Broken n so is the win.. big congrats!
La France Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 1:59 AM
Upma, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats !
Rycroft Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Congrats well written owl poem x
La France Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 11:02 AM
Wendy, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment, appreciate ~
Lane Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 10:17 AM
that's an adorable picture and great win, BW. Congratulations.
La France Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 10:21 AM
Lin, thanks for the congratulations and the great, and it's the expression on the baby owl, the peacefulness that I think is awesome, the love of the mother owl is so beautiful . . .
Haight Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 10:03 AM
Great owl personification and form, BW. Love your picture too! Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 10:06 AM
Sandra, thanks for the compliment and the congrats and the hugs, oh, isn't that the most adorable picture !
George   Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Wonderful personification, Constance. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
La France Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 10:03 AM
Daniel, thanks so much for the congratulations and the compliment ~
La France Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 10:02 AM
Elaine, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats, so appreciated ~
Turner Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 7:28 AM
Back to say congratulations for writing this prize winning piece of art. Well deserved. Peace:)
La France Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 10:07 AM
Daniel, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment . . .
Roper Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 10:58 PM
Broken Wing, your “The Barn Owl ” was wonderful perfect form! Thank you so much for writing a very special poem for my contest I was honored. Happy Valentine’s Day Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 12:31 AM
Eve, thanks for the contest and my placement, appreciate ~
Sage Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 8:07 PM
that's a nice form, and you've done it excellently...best of luck in the contest
La France Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 1:29 AM
Sage, thank you so much for the excellent, so grateful ~
Onclaud Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 10:25 AM
truly an endearing write, dear constance... you have a thick file of good memories.. huggs
La France Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 1:30 AM
Nette, thanks for the endearing and the hugs !
Lamoureux Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 9:05 AM
This is one of my favorite forms and you have done a masterful job. It shows further skill that you were able to do it with rhyme.
La France Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Richard, thanks for visiting my poem and for the compliment.
Boddie Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 8:27 AM
I like this form and your style....with hints of wisdom through the owl....then the repetition goes so deep....with a story that is at entertaining's peak....you did that bw, don't ever stop....you can always find a way to make a jaw drop....;)
La France Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Eric, thank you so much for that nice comment and the compliments, so grateful ~
Allison Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 6:49 AM
Wonderful poem I love the form you used and the personification is beautiful... incidentally the dress I wore on my birthday has little owls on it and hubby got me an owl doorstop as a gift:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 8:17 AM
Jan, thanks for visiting and for the wonderful and beautiful, oh your dress and gift must be lovely !
Garg Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 5:39 AM
Gracefully personified..... GL for the contest.
La France Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 8:18 AM
Archana, oh I love that word, gracefully, thank you ~
Fraser Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 5:18 AM
Hi Broken Wings.. I love owls. Majestic creatures indeed and I love how you brought them to life in this great write. I think you'll do well in the contest. Blessings Carl
La France Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 8:20 AM
Carl, thank you for the compliment, oh yes owls are delightful creatures, I just love the images I found of the mother barn owl and her baby !
Mansfield Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 5:01 AM
I could almost hear those whistles and howls... hoots in the darkness.... and the vibrancy of those wings as they beat in the still night air.... Thank you :)
Mansfield Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 5:30 AM
Hi Broken wings... no need to stop... Why limit yourself? Continue and complete the poem, if in your heart it is still incomplete.. Then you can sit back, smile and sigh with satisfaction :)
La France Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 5:06 AM
Thomas, oh thanks for that nice comment, I had so much more to say about the barn owls but well was limited, silent hunters on majestic wings, perfect hearing, they do not need their eyes to hunt, adorable babies with their heart-shaped faces, little hoots and whistles and snapping beaks, and oh so pretty to behold ~
Turner Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 4:37 AM
Well done and I love the subject matter. Always been fascinated by owls. Good luck in contest.
La France Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 4:39 AM
Daniel, thanks so much for the nice comment, I just loved this theme...
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