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The Azure Blue

I closed tight my eyes and in a trance I saw God; he painted the sky! Picking up a brush pure blue; he swirled a slash of azure! Hesitating long, he dipped a brush rosy pink, then, held a brush gold! Gazing and pondering long, God painted an orb of gold! ___________________________________ July 23, 2012 (Edit December 29, 2019) Poetry/Tanka/The Azure Blue Copyright Protected, ID 12-1212-511-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted into the contest, Strand Special 12 sponsor, Brian Strand Third Place

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Date: 1/1/2020 7:40:00 AM
Lovely poem, Dear Heart! Congratulations on the win! ...Fran
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Constance La France
Date: 1/1/2020 1:07:00 PM
Francis, thank you so much for the lovely and the congratulations !
Date: 12/31/2019 10:57:00 AM
Dear heart what a beautiful win!;) happy new year my friend!;)
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Constance La France
Date: 12/31/2019 11:00:00 AM
Brenda, thanks for the beautiful and Happy New Year to you too !
Date: 12/31/2019 5:14:00 AM
Beautiful ...
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Constance La France
Date: 12/31/2019 11:00:00 AM
Kai, thank you for the beautiful !
Date: 12/30/2019 2:44:00 AM
The creation in a vision Constance. Love the imagery. Happy New year. Tom
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Constance La France
Date: 12/30/2019 11:35:00 AM
Tom, thanks so much for the visit and the compliment and Happy New Year back to you !

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