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The Autumn of Life

They walk hand in hand down the umber trail; the same trail they walked forty years before. Amber tinted leaves descend without fail; saffron colored blooms line the forest floor, and cinnamon hued leaves and colors more. The crimson painted sky shows through the trees as the sun in the west settles with ease. The crisp fall air of the late afternoon flows gently by as the pair makes their way beneath the rising of the pumpkin moon. Her once ginger hair is now a dull grey; this once young couple is older today. Still hearts glowing fire, they live without strife as they journey through the autumn of life. October 1, 2017

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Date: 7/28/2020 2:32:00 PM
Wonderfully structured. Apt for Comp. name. Vibrant visuals, lingering fondness for their plight.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/29/2020 2:45:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Sigrid, it is always a joy to see someone visiting my older poems. John
Date: 1/6/2018 10:54:00 PM
Wow John! This is show stopping talent. Not surprised it was a winner. Congratulations!
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/7/2018 7:21:00 AM
This was my first contest entry. I spent a lot of time writing this poem and it didn’t even show in the first contest I entered it in. I was very disappointed and almost quit writing.
Date: 10/13/2017 5:09:00 AM
Blessings and heart-felt congratulations on your win, John - wonderful work and well-earned, my friend! :-)
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/13/2017 6:16:00 AM
Thanks, Gregory, I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 10/11/2017 8:56:00 PM
John, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem!
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/11/2017 9:08:00 PM
Broken Wings, thank you so much for this placement; on glad you enjoyed my poem.
Date: 10/2/2017 3:09:00 PM
Loved every word John, especially pumpkin moon, and the entering the autumn of life seasonal metaphor is very strong, this should do well in the contest!
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/2/2017 8:01:00 PM
Thanks for your comments, John, and good luck to you as well.
Date: 10/2/2017 4:46:00 AM
Very beautifully pictured, good luck on the contest:)
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/2/2017 5:02:00 AM
Thank you Victoria; I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/1/2017 6:24:00 PM
A beautiful poem John, especially the second stanza with lines like; ' beneath the rising of the pumpkin moon', and also the last two lines of your poem; great poetic expression. Well done. Good luck in the contest! :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/1/2017 6:44:00 PM
Susan, thank you so much for your welcome comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/1/2017 3:27:00 PM
absolutely delightful and i especially love that final couplet:-) you wove the words in so beautifully John:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/1/2017 3:48:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/1/2017 3:17:00 PM
- "beneath the rising of the pumpkin moon" ... a beautiful picture of the moon, John - A wonderful poem - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/1/2017 3:21:00 PM
Thank you my friend, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/1/2017 3:21:00 PM
Thank you my friend, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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