Tears of a Raven

She left the “unkindness”, descended upon  a mossy knoll
Over looking the darkness of the moonless, misty graveyard
The ebony clouds shielding the glistening tears of the Raven
Tears of LOVE for those that, waiting : Sing at the gates of Heaven
Tears of Sorrow for those, unbelievers, who will spend Eternity in Hell
Do not show me the face of despair, the tears of forever unknown : 
Her tears roll down the contours of  her cheeks  falling to the Ground
Creating the Zenith of  an Everlasting ROSE never to be seen
As Roses grow where Her tears splashed upon the wanting Earth
She spreads her wings and returns to the “Congress” from wince She came
Darker and Lighter than the rest of the “death  flock” soaring  ABOVE
 
Inspired by the Contest " Among the Dead "
Sponsored by ~ A Rambling Poet ~
Dedicated to the ones I LOVE ; " Recieved by the LORD "
 By HGarvey Daniel Esquire
             5th Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 11:44 AM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations HG. Love, Carol
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February 19, 2011 at 7:11 AM
Many congratulations HG on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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February 18, 2011 at 6:42 PM
Great write HGarvey!Congrats on your well deserved win.
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February 18, 2011 at 6:19 AM
Excellent lines about the tears of love and sorrow. Great story behind your poem, H.G. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
George   Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 12:22 AM
Wonderful story, dear HG. Many congrat's on your big win. Lainie
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February 17, 2011 at 6:24 PM
Well done in Constance's contest with this fine entry. Congratulations.
Johnson Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 6:22 PM
Very, very nice. Congratulaions on your win. Love, (Mom) Joyce
Freeman Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 6:03 PM
Congraaaaaaaatulations HG, on this great honor fifth place win. agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:31 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Constance, HG
Haick Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:02 PM
Congratulations on your super fine win in the "Among the Dead" Contest, HG! Love, Annalise
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February 17, 2011 at 4:46 PM
Congrats HG my silent beau on your wonderful winning poem in Among the Dead with this exceptional entry luv.. enjoy another grand victory with luv ..forever your "Sweetheart" ...
George   Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 6:13 AM
Wow! Sensational my friend. Lainie
Guzzi Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 4:58 PM
Most excellent write and a sure winner! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 5:29 AM
I am reading such amazing poetry this morning HG my forever friend. I am glad yours is among the ones I have had the pleasure to read today. I wish you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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January 19, 2011 at 3:13 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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