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Let me tell you a story . . .
A story about a clown called Tatters who loves to entertain, he wears a whitewashed face with showy greasepaint features: Tatters, has red balding hair ragged and straggly always, his nose is red and honks, his outfit baggy and very frilly; he performs silly antics and blows up balloons for children. But, that was then- now, his eyes are sad with pain, his painted on smile cannot hide his frown and great sadness: his costume is dusty and threadbare and his big shoes not shiny, once such a funny clown, now his heart and spirit is broken; his life has no meaning and he hides behind his clown facade. Tatters, is old now and his bones creak, groan and moan, and work is hard to find for an aging clown with sad eyes: seems kids don't like clowns like they used in his younger days, but, one day a loving God reached out his hand for Tatters; and now in a Heavenly temple Tatters honks his nose ... with happy eyes and a big smile! ________________ January 04, 2023 Poetry/Narrative/Tatters Copyright Protected, ID 01-1514-315 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, Tatters sponsor, Mystic Rose Rose, Judged 01/11/2023 First Place

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Date: 1/14/2023 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win Constance! A sweet yet sad story, but true for clowns like Tatters. Life takes its toll. Blessings for a wonderful new year!
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Date: 1/15/2023 7:35:00 PM
Anaya, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, blessings in 2023, Constance
Date: 1/13/2023 4:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win my dear friend Constance! A very beautifully sad and interesting story poem you've creatively crafted my dear friend. I love the ending. Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings always. Hugs
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Date: 1/14/2023 6:43:00 AM
Len, thank you so much for the visit, wonderful comment, congratulations and compliment, blessings and hugs, Constance
Date: 1/12/2023 4:38:00 PM
Love description: his nose is red and honks, his outfit baggy and very frilly… and work is hard to find for an aging clown with sad eyes…until he enters the big tent in the sky! Congratulations on 1st place!
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Date: 1/13/2023 2:44:00 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the visit, great comment, compliment, and congratulations, Constance
Date: 1/12/2023 9:33:00 AM
I'm back with a huge CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 1/13/2023 2:45:00 PM
Janice, thank you so much for the visit again, comment and congrats, Constance
Date: 1/12/2023 6:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. I love it. Have a wonderful/blessed day.......................
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Date: 1/13/2023 2:46:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the visit, comment, congratulations, and compliment, blessings Constance
Date: 1/11/2023 7:43:00 PM
Constance, expected beginnings of the known, and poignancy of the unknown, concluding in a righteous reward. An engaging write my friend. Hat's off to your trophy win, Aloha William
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Date: 1/11/2023 10:27:00 PM
William, thank you so much for the visit, comment, and compliment, Aloha, Constance
Date: 1/9/2023 5:10:00 AM
Such a captivating poem, Constance:-) Sure looks like a winner to me! Soupmail.
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Date: 1/9/2023 12:26:00 PM
Edward, thank you so much for the visit, comment, compliment and encouragement, Constance
Date: 1/8/2023 8:08:00 AM
Happy ending! :)
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Date: 1/9/2023 12:26:00 PM
Linda, thank you so much for the visit, and comment, Constance
Date: 1/6/2023 12:18:00 PM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 1/6/2023 11:00:00 PM
Sara, thanks so much for the visit, comment and compliment, Constance
Date: 1/5/2023 4:46:00 AM
Lovely story ! So happy that Tatters' eyes are no more sad but gleaming with joy. You have done justice to every detail of the clown in the picture. All the best dear Constance....!
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Date: 1/5/2023 8:00:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the visit, compliment and nice comment, Constance
Date: 1/5/2023 12:43:00 AM
Sweet story, Constance, I did mine sad:)
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Date: 1/5/2023 8:01:00 AM
Jo, thank you so much for the visit, and compliment, I will visit your poem, Constance
Date: 1/4/2023 9:19:00 AM
Oh, what a wonderful, touching, decriptive poem, Constance. I truly appreciate a poem that can make me smile while tears are in my eyes! Janice
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Date: 1/4/2023 11:16:00 AM
Janice, thank you so much for the visit, compliment and lovely comment, Constance

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