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Tarnished Reflections

The razor strap always welted my skin And quickly crippled my soul as a child Balled flesh of a hand to my head a sin The angry pain over time I have exiled No tears fall now from my time of beating Nor memories close by an anguished cry Death to this parent came cold and fleeting Turned away and not needing to know why The luster of childhood never did glow It was legs and arms I rolled into a ball The betrayal of love was all that I'd know Crumbling shadows on a tear-stained wall The burnished days of youth I never knew Its painful tarnish has always bled through 3/22/18 contest Tarnished Reflections

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Date: 4/4/2018 11:44:00 PM
A haunting gripping unveiling of betrayal and violated youth. A FAVE for me for its raw emotion and my wishing I could help bear that cross.
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Date: 4/2/2018 7:01:00 PM
Wow Frederic. So very, very sad. I feel such pain for this child. Congrats on your placement! ~ Judy
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Date: 4/1/2018 4:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this emotional poem. Well written...
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Date: 4/1/2018 10:42:00 AM
Frederic, the final couplet encompasses the harsh reality of the lingering pain and fear that the "stain" will bleed through. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 3/25/2018 2:16:00 AM
Harrowing, Frederic, hopefully cathartic. Childhood pain stays raw the longest. Regards, Viv
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Date: 3/24/2018 9:53:00 PM
How deeply and sadly emotional your poem is Frederic. So palpable is the pain I felt in your poetic lines expressed with powerful and reflective clarity. Best wishes for a win with your superb sonnet. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 3/22/2018 6:51:00 PM
Very powerful description of abuse, Frederic, and very well done.
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Date: 3/22/2018 2:17:00 PM
I felt the tarnish in this one, deep lines, great flow in your sonnet..
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/22/2018 2:59:00 PM
hard to relive
Date: 3/22/2018 11:27:00 AM
Wow Frederic. This is so well expressed and brings tears to my eyes. No child should have to endure this. It hurts and lasts. Good luck in the contest.
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