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to swim the seas Egyptian cotton, deep we plunge the pillows as our passions creep the bedclothes and our limbs twist in a heap creating naughty games to help us sleep or brace the bastions of our carnal keep and if our egos, spent, come up for air we plunge the pillows as our passions creep and dive for deeper urges ... if we dare. such flavor tempts a corporeal crush your honey, sticky sweet, my sugar rush ignites my body with its fevered flush a feather of your wing to gently brush upon your cheek, a kiss of even's blush as daylight bleeds to death upon the sky your honey, sticky sweet, my sugar rush will prove its spicy savor in your sigh. oh, angel, how delicious is thy fall? ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Standard Contest Number 55" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Rhyme Time II Poetry Contest", Laura Loo, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 12/16/2017 1:33:00 PM
Zowie! How naughty yet nice is this Christmas delight Greg! I agree it is First Place material! Congratulations my friend! This is going into my Faves! : )
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/17/2017 10:14:00 PM
Oh, that's so wonderfully sweet of you, Connie, and I so appreciate it! Your opinion is one I value highly, and I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one ... blessings to you, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 12/8/2017 3:33:00 AM
I'LL HAVE WHAT HE'S HAVING!!! WOW!! "as daylight bleeds to death upon the sky" what a visual image of lust.....
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2017 12:12:00 AM
Thanks so much, John, I'm pleased you liked it, my friend! :-)
Date: 12/7/2017 11:26:00 PM
Congrats again, Gregory! Superb.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/8/2017 3:21:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line - I greatly appreciate it, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 11/29/2017 9:14:00 PM
Congrats Greg on another winner, this is a stunning sensuous poem, very worthy winner!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/29/2017 10:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, John, I greatly appreciate that!
Date: 11/26/2017 7:37:00 AM
Such a well-written poem, Gregory, Congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/29/2017 10:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra, I so appreciate the kind comment - blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 11/25/2017 7:19:00 AM
what a beautiful poem der Greg! Loved it...thank you and congrats on top placement :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/29/2017 10:47:00 PM
I'm honored and humbled, Laura, just to be on such a list of wonderful writers ... thank you so much - I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem! :-) <3
Date: 11/24/2017 8:18:00 PM
Gregory, congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem. Excellent!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/29/2017 10:46:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Eve, thanks so much, Friend! :-) <3
Date: 11/23/2017 5:58:00 AM
Wow, Greg! A lovely and sensual write! Congrats!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/23/2017 8:03:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim, I so appreciate that, my friend - Happy Thanksgiving! :-) <3
Date: 11/23/2017 1:24:00 AM
Well I can tell you that my wife just loves, loves, loves this write my friend, I thought it was pretty hot myself, congrats on your win
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/23/2017 2:51:00 AM
Oh, that's very kind of you, Brian, and I'm so thankful for the kind words - I'm pleased you shared this with your wife as well and that she liked it! Blessings and joy to you both, my friend! :-)
Date: 11/23/2017 12:03:00 AM
Congratulations, Greg on your win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/23/2017 2:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, Subimal! :-)
Date: 11/22/2017 4:59:00 PM
oh so sensual Greg a passionate write indeed:-) :-) congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/23/2017 2:49:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed it, Jan, and thank you so very much for the kind comments, friend! :-) <3
Date: 11/22/2017 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations, if I smoked after reading this passion-filled work I would light up a cigarette
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/23/2017 2:49:00 AM
LOL - thanks, Buddy, that means a lot - I'm glad you liked this one, my friend! :-)
Date: 11/22/2017 10:50:00 AM
Hot dog-o-dy hot...my friend...congrats on the win...the nice angels are looking down on you lol...^WW^
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Date: 11/23/2017 2:48:00 AM
Thank you kindly, my friend - I am certainly blessed here with kindness, encouragement, and friends like you! All the best! :-)
Date: 11/22/2017 9:57:00 AM
Gregory, what a wonderful, sensual write; enjoyed! Congrats on your win. John
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Date: 11/23/2017 2:47:00 AM
Thank you, John, I'm so pleased that you liked it, friend! :-)
Date: 11/18/2017 7:38:00 PM
wow, sweet sweet sweet!!!! and sexy! What an awesome poem of passion, Gregory. Love your title for it. and that pillow image!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/21/2017 2:38:00 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea, I enjoy these little forays into passion, and trying to stimulate imaginations - get the reader's blood flowing a bit - so much fun! Oh, what words can do! Blessings, friend! :-) <3
Date: 11/18/2017 9:55:00 AM
Beautifully done Gregory...GL in the contest
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/21/2017 2:35:00 AM
That's very kind of you, Joseph, thank you very much, friend! :-)
Date: 11/18/2017 9:34:00 AM
Great poetic construction. Very intimate moments shared. Good job.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/21/2017 2:34:00 AM
Thanks so much, Alfred - blessings! :-)
Date: 11/18/2017 8:14:00 AM
Wonderfully luxuriating in sensuality ... Beautiful poetry ... Great ....
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/21/2017 2:34:00 AM
Thank you so very much, probir - I'm glad you liked it! :-)
Date: 11/18/2017 6:04:00 AM
Oh My Greg, what a passionately sensual write here my friend! I have done exactly this which you write of within your poem...I blush with ecstasy! I really loved your intense piece, full of immensely delightful things...I loved this incredible poem! Great Work!!
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Date: 11/21/2017 2:33:00 AM
Very pleased you enjoyed my poem, Russell, and thank you so much for the wonderful comments, my friend - blessings! :-)
Date: 11/17/2017 10:00:00 PM
Great write Greg! Wow!! I do love the image of "daylight bleeds to death upon the sky". Good luck in the contest. Best, Judy
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Date: 11/18/2017 3:06:00 AM
That's very sweet of you, Judith - thank you so much, my friend! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 11/17/2017 2:02:00 PM
Greg, an awesome write and ever so sensual and I love your image too, best of luck !
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/18/2017 3:05:00 AM
Very kind of you, Constance, thank you ever so much, friend! <3 :-)
Date: 11/17/2017 9:43:00 AM
What a deliciously sensual poem. A sure winner. Congrats, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/18/2017 3:04:00 AM
Thanks so much, Line - so pleased you liked it! :-)
Date: 11/17/2017 8:06:00 AM
I swear my iPad pages are sticking together ;p Hot stuff! My best to you in the contest! Now time for a cigarette...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/18/2017 3:04:00 AM
LOL - Thank you so much, Mo, that's the kind of reaction I was hoping for! Blessings, Friend! :-) <3

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