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The hot cars slowly wend their way down Mandalay boulevard. Young men whistle and honk at the pretty girls walking away from the beach and toward the nearest club. It is nighttime here in Clearwater Beach, Florida. We take in the various sounds and scents and revel in each experience. The ice cream shop is just a block away and soon we'll be indulging in the best ice cream ever. Everything tastes better when you're on vacation. She asks me if I want a lick of hers, cherry vanilla, and I offer her a taste of my dark chocolate. Later, around midnight, it's back to the beach again, this time to take in the starry view and listen to the waves gently and peacefully caress the shoreline. After laying there a few moments her hand touches mine and a tingle shoots down my spine. Married almost thirty years and she still gets to me. I begin to ramble on about the awesomeness of the cosmos and how each star is similar and yet unique. From our perspective they seem so close together, yet we know they are light years apart from one another. Suddenly she sits up and places her finger upon my lips as if to shush me, then slowly begins to unbutton her top. Tonight, she and the cosmos are mine. luminaries glow each one like the eyes of God transcendent rapture

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Date: 9/26/2023 1:41:00 PM
a gentle and beautiful love story...Married 30 years is awesome. Glad you found your soulmate. have a great evening, Sara
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/26/2023 1:44:00 PM
Thirty years in December. Thx Sara. Hope your life is good
Date: 9/8/2023 12:09:00 PM
Hello Tom woody, You have found your soulmate. I wish you many years of happiness together. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/9/2023 12:11:00 PM
Hello Tom Woody, you are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/8/2023 12:29:00 PM
Thank you Darlene
Date: 9/7/2023 1:01:00 PM
This is such a beautiful love story. It's always great to hear of love that lasts and still excites one into their more seasoned years. I have to admit I'm slightly jealous of this. God bless your marriage and I hope that you two continue to keep that passionate and appreciation for nature forever.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/7/2023 1:04:00 PM
That's a kind blessing. Thank you
Date: 9/6/2023 10:03:00 AM
Hello Tom. I love entries and stories of romance and love and your entry has it. Your moment in time and scene are very romantic that no one would argue. I loved your line of "Married almost thirty years and she still gets to me." How beautiful is that. Very. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent with us. It was a pleasure turning to your page. Keep enjoying poetry. Take Care (smile)
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/6/2023 10:12:00 AM
Thx for reading my little snippet of a life
Date: 9/6/2023 5:05:00 AM
- What a romantic and beautiful poem, Tom - hugs
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/6/2023 5:06:00 AM
Thx for visit Anne Lise. Means alot
Date: 9/4/2023 5:17:00 PM
A Haibun master, I see. Exquisite poetry, Tom. The Haiku is luminescent. The story flowed as smooth as the waves lapping at the sand, and the personal touch (thirty years) was endearing. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your meaningful poetry, my friend. Till next time, Bill ps yes I FAVed this one. :-)
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/4/2023 5:27:00 PM
Ooh daddy loves dem faves. Yes, haibun is my current preferred form, though Charlotte is inspiring me toward free verse/prose. Thx Bill
Date: 9/4/2023 12:12:00 PM
Lovely and more.. Enjoyed smooth read! Nice to meet you Tom, nice to read too :) Ice cream in hot summer night is so cool. Have a great time!
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/4/2023 12:20:00 PM
Yessir and thx
Date: 9/4/2023 6:39:00 AM
I can relate. I’ve been with my sweetie for 30 years. She still makes my heart flutter. I enjoyed this passionate piece.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/4/2023 6:52:00 AM
seen her photo. totally understand. ours will be thirty this december
Date: 9/4/2023 3:49:00 AM
oh, love this
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/4/2023 5:14:00 AM
Oh cool
Date: 9/3/2023 4:34:00 PM
A lovely portrayal of a perfect romantic night. Great writing, Tom.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/3/2023 4:36:00 PM
Yes it was. Thx Evelyn
Date: 9/3/2023 6:05:00 AM
Tom, this is such a romantic tale so delicately spun. The magic of it draws each one into a silent spell. Your vacation is filled with excitement and love. Your experience at the beach in the silence of the night with stars casting stealing glances on the drama to be acted out soon will be so thrilling, I am sure. Great haibun
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/3/2023 6:07:00 AM
Much thanks Valsa. This actually was our honeymoon but I've changed up some of the details
Date: 9/3/2023 5:34:00 AM
Tom, your Sweet Summer Night is such a pleasure to share! You so perfectly captured the essence of romantic beauty! Every line succeeded effortlessly! I loved it! Happy Sunday!
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/3/2023 5:39:00 AM
I find myself writing more romance these days Mike. Thx much
Date: 9/3/2023 2:07:00 AM
Oh wow you're indeed a very brilliant storyteller.. I love the delicate details that have been sequined here with such gorgeous descriptions that paint a poetically resplendent scene in front of the eyes.. The whole ambience of vacation and summer, aligned with love and passion.. Ah, so beautifully done! I particularly adore the haiku at the end.. "Each one like the eyes of God" That's definitely profound! Loved reading this! I definitely enjoy reading your writes always!
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/3/2023 5:40:00 AM
Appreciate your visit my friend
Date: 9/2/2023 1:51:00 PM
I loved your gentle recollection of a romantic, starry night at the beach. Your words touched me. The haiku at the end was perfect, subtly capturing the hidden theme of your poem. Well done
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/2/2023 3:46:00 PM
Thx Sara
Date: 9/2/2023 12:07:00 PM
Will read soon
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Date: 9/2/2023 8:02:00 AM
Much enjoyed your description of a romantic night on the beach, Tom. You are still in love --love can be so powerful and eternal! Passions blazing beneath the stars!!
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/2/2023 9:52:00 AM
Indeed. Thx Veej
Date: 9/2/2023 6:21:00 AM
So much beauty here-Love it
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/7/2023 1:04:00 PM
As are you my poetic friend
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/4/2023 12:42:00 PM
It's beautiful
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/2/2023 6:28:00 AM
Glad you approve Charmaine. I can't write romance quite like you but this is my best shot
Date: 9/2/2023 6:11:00 AM
Descriptive passionate haibun, i love the imagery and how you’ve made this flow. “Everything tastes better when you’re on vacation “ deep line. Are you from Florida ? Sounds like a beautiful beach too. And your storytelling skills are as always just profound and very entertaining. I loved the haiku too. “Each one like the eyes of God” soulful and moving write this is. So good to see you writing more kingy, and your haibuns are always the best
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/2/2023 6:14:00 AM
Yeah I need to post something a little darker I think. Too much luv stuff lately lol. Thanks for singling out the haiku line. I rather liked that one myself
Date: 9/2/2023 4:43:00 AM
juxtaposing the cold of ice cream with the heat of passion, nice touch..stirs my memories of a holiday romance in turkey, warm nights on the beach, the stars, he worked in the hotel, it was nice while it lasted..
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/3/2023 4:36:00 PM
Forbidden chocolate! Buwahahaha
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 9/3/2023 4:57:00 AM
what's your favourite flavour? it won't be vanilla
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/2/2023 5:37:00 AM
Ice cream and sex, a classy combo? Why not. Thx for visit Charlotte
Date: 9/2/2023 2:47:00 AM
Very descriptive then a turn into the passionate. Interesting reading. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/2/2023 5:38:00 AM
Appreciated
Date: 9/1/2023 7:51:00 PM
On a night when stars brighten their glow, two have become one. So romantic and dreamy. Now, I'm in the mood for some vanilla ice cream. Yum ! :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/2/2023 5:38:00 AM
Yummy indeed!
Date: 9/1/2023 7:47:00 PM
Life doesn’t get any sweeter than this, Tommy. ;) An enchanting night for sure. I love it! xx Kina
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/2/2023 5:39:00 AM
Hello Akkina
Date: 9/1/2023 4:22:00 PM
This exquisitely crafted poem is a masterpiece in itself. The carefully chosen words and skillful metaphors enhance the inherent beauty of this piece. Once again, the Haibun expresses gratitude with eloquent descriptions, captivating the reader from the very beginning. The accompanying haiku effortlessly creates a vivid image, further enriching the overall experience.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/1/2023 4:27:00 PM
Thx sotto. Maybe time to do something a little darker. Have a great weekend
Date: 9/1/2023 11:56:00 AM
Ah my friend, you found true delight eating ice cream and other activities that are a delicious thrill. Something about night, beach, ocean and melody of the waves excites we humans. A very fine haibun my friend. God bless.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/1/2023 1:35:00 PM
Summertime delights! Thx Robert
Date: 9/1/2023 10:35:00 AM
Once again a haibun thank is full of description in its prose right from the start complimented by a haiku that paints its own picture..
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/1/2023 1:34:00 PM
Thx SO
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