Sweet Potato Pie

Perfumed memories drift
across a sensuous universe
delivered sotto voce:  Smell
of morning mist, me into you,
you into black coffee
wearing your silk caftan
as through an open window
city smells melt up
from littered sidewalks,
sparerib bouquet flies out
from juke joints and you,
always you, like fudge brownies
hot from the oven until
one day at thirty-nine,
you fell into a heroin spoon
wafting death 
in our cold empty room.

Now, decades gone, in my still-keening mind
passes down a long imagined hallway
with many closed doors,
where a light beneath each sill
waits to be opened to smell,
where memories dwell
never far
from sweet potato pie.



 ~~~~~~~~~  revised 8/09 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 1/9/2010 2:05:00 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured..it is a piece that squeezes your heart..I love the title that repeats in the last line. BG
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Date: 1/6/2010 4:10:00 PM
Well this made it through the first round and now on a feature of the week and on to the finals we go. Great writing here, Sue. Lainie
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Date: 1/5/2010 9:15:00 AM
Many congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week Sue, Happy New Year to you >> James,xx
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Date: 1/4/2010 12:08:00 PM
The vivid imagery works well to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. I wish you ongoing success. Karen
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Date: 1/4/2010 8:45:00 AM
Congrats Sue on your featured poem of the week on the Soup.. well written ... may your new year be filled with blessings... luv... creativeness.. friendships... health... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/4/2010 8:15:00 AM
What a beautiful, yet such sadness interwined in this wonderful poem. From a gifted poet, this is heartbreaking and sweet at the same time. Congrats on this feature. Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/4/2010 6:40:00 AM
Congats on your feature! Wow! How did I miss this? What a wonderful write! I am partial to food intertwined wth words..but not spo lartial to sweet potato pie :) Hugs Always, Robin
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Date: 1/4/2010 3:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sue. May you have may more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2010 12:24:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Sue.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/23/2009 3:17:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Sue and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 10:59:00 PM
Dear Sue, Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/21/2009 4:45:00 PM
we two ole broads only got 1 in..I feel like I'm slippin LOL BUT some of those entries were magnificient! As toyour well rounded works I always enjoy every scense you bring into your writing..to taste & smell & touch..you're a wonder! Light & Love
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:25:00 AM
Sue,Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/21/2009 12:42:00 AM
Congrats on your first round contest success Sue.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/20/2009 1:45:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Sue! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:05:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem Sue >> James
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Date: 9/17/2009 2:36:00 PM
so wonderful.a sweet and sour memory.. makes my glands ache in my throat as if to cry or because the taste was so strong! Great win! Light & Love
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Date: 8/30/2009 5:02:00 AM
Sue congrats on placing in Chris's contest - God Bless, mj
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Date: 8/25/2009 7:18:00 AM
touching and evocative poem, Sue! All the best, KRista
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Date: 8/25/2009 6:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. This poem is so vivid, it speaks of great heartbreak and great love.. it is truly wonderful.
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:50:00 PM
This was so deserving a win, Sue....what outstanding poetry this is! I'm again taken into that deep place with this one! Well deserved kuddos!
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Christopher's contest!
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Date: 8/24/2009 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Christopher's contest Sue. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2009 8:10:00 AM
Congrats on your success in CH's contest Sue.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/24/2009 7:42:00 AM
Congrats and thanks for entering.
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