Sweet Love

Alluring angelic appeal a divine delicate delight you, a succulent strawberry so sweet ripe and revealing a pure passion, profound rosy red radiance come to me casual curious one we shall surrender, subdued a divine delicate delight my statuesque satin sugar liberal love lingers aloud enticing and exquisite a dance of dalliance float free a pure passion, profound chocolate dipped charm murmurous mingling ripe and revealing a divine devotion you, a succulent strawberry so sweet A Linda-Marie Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/9/2010 11:04:00 AM

Congratulations Rick on your win in Linda Marie's contest "Luscious Love Lingers"Alliteration. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2010 7:53:00 PM

Love how you made every line be a different kind of alliteration. A great entry it was into the contest. Congratulations. Andrea

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/8/2010 6:16:00 PM

You made this poem yummy as a sweet strawberry!! Congratulations, Rick!! :)

Constance La France

Date: 9/7/2010 9:37:00 PM

Congratulations Rick on third place in Linda's contest with this , I think it is fantastic.. Love Constance

Cas Davis

Date: 9/6/2010 10:36:00 AM

Nice poem, I like your use of the alliteration style. Most ppl adhere to strictly to its rules and end up restricting the poem itself, or they just plain lose their imagination when it comes to allit.. You should see my Peach Party entry and tell me what you think. 7/7

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/6/2010 7:33:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your big win in my LLL Alliteration contest... a wonderful write ... and thankxxx so much for the assistance on the contest finalizing.. I luv a good challenge and with great friends like u to help it was peachy ...enjoy your win and good luck with your own new contest... luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/28/2010 9:27:00 PM

Strawberries dipped in chocolate -- yummy, Rick. Good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/28/2010 7:02:00 PM

My favorite is also Strawberry Good luck in the contest, Rick

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/28/2010 4:54:00 PM

Nice one Rick..terribly terrific today! BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/28/2010 4:42:00 PM

Thankxxx for supporting my contest Rick.. and good luck... my riend.. with luv.. appreciate your prayers for my son also.. he is doing much better thankxxx be to God and the fact that prayer produces miracles..luv..

Audrey Haick

Date: 8/28/2010 4:22:00 PM

Way to go with this wonderful poem, Rick. Best of luck in the contest, but you definitely don't need it, 'cause you already have a winner! Peace, Audrey

John Rhinem

Date: 8/28/2010 4:14:00 PM

Smile ~ "Wow," some of these strawberry poems which I have read here at The Soup are very, "Sweet Indeed" ~ Smile, and "Yours My Dear Gifted Friend Rick Parise," is right up there amid the top of them all ~ "Deliciously Splendid Poe" ~ Hope "You" are doing well my friend and, "My Love & Warmth to You & Your Loves, Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Evening Dear Rick, Amid The Sugar Sweetened Perfection of, 'A Stawberries Heart Shaped & Endless Love;'" Bye My Friend!:) ~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2010 12:45:00 PM

Nice and good luck in Lindas, contest,..p.d.