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whirling, twirling, swirling clouds in a liquid sky mother says be careful dear, have some tulip pie mongrels, thieves and vagrants dream of life beyond the sun daddy says he's coming home cuz war was too much fun cats and dogs and lizard things are raining all around grandma's flying toward the moon and won't stay on the ground truthful lies and purple skies, chaos at my door dragon kings and pigs with wings search for evermore comets crashing, sinners flee as rivers turn blood red candy canes and chocolate drops, everyone is dead dreams and schemes and vision quests, reality's a blur am I sleeping or awake, wish I could be sure * This one won first place in a poetry contest at the local library some years ago

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Date: 5/3/2024 6:33:00 PM
It was definitely a Poetic trip you took us on with psychedelic undertones. Great piece of writing. Each line outdid the one before. Surreal in every sense of the word.
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Date: 5/3/2024 3:52:00 PM
You built a beautiful house here. Nicely done. Great wood, woody.
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Date: 5/3/2024 4:39:00 AM
A fascinating piece of poetry that I found to be quite imaginative and thought-provoking. Your skillful use of vivid imagery throughout the poem was truly captivating, especially the experience of eating a pie made from tulips. Despite the surreality, I found the poem to be quite mesmerising and well-crafted. Your ability to paint a picture with words and evoke emotions through language is truly impressive. Well done Tommy. Truly enjoyed and i can see why it won. Congrats and a Fave for me.
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/3/2024 5:01:00 AM
It's an oldie but thx for visit Maria
Date: 5/2/2024 6:33:00 AM
I unblocked you,)))) Request supportive comments!! If you dont like any poem, move to any poet you do like. Thank you. I saw your commebt at keiths. Pangie
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/2/2024 9:01:00 AM
I'm free, I'm free, I'm freeeeeeee
Date: 5/2/2024 2:30:00 AM
Have you lost your muse? You are so imaginative.
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/2/2024 4:45:00 AM
Thx Victor. I don't write under compulsion or out of need. When I'm in the mood or when something strikes my fancy I'll write. This one is many years old, but I've written quite a few new ones of late as well. Thx for checking in
Date: 5/1/2024 2:26:00 PM
Such imaginative verse, Tom. There is such a fantastical flow from one surreal image to the next. The internal rhymes are exceptional like "truthful lies and purple skies, chaos at my door." Certainly a winner in so many respects. Congratulations! Brian
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/1/2024 2:55:00 PM
Hey thx for stopping by
Date: 4/30/2024 10:43:00 AM
i wanna try some tulip pie that sounds lovely. perfect kind of springtime dessert
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/30/2024 3:04:00 PM
That's what she said. Idk. Thx
Date: 4/30/2024 9:51:00 AM
Gosh! What a brilliant write this is! I love the surreality that youv delivered in a very creative manner here. Your opening lines with those internal rhymes and also the way youv painted imagery of raining cats dogs and lizards! Whoa! Youv really used poetic techniques in this one and i love especially the lines “ comets crashing, sinners flee as rivers turn blood red candy canes and chocolate drops, everyone is dead” this gives me the fantasy vibes and is so whimsical! So magical! Love it. Definitely a fave for me too!
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/30/2024 3:05:00 PM
Thx inky. It's an oldie. Been a bit lazy of late
Date: 4/29/2024 6:03:00 PM
Delightful and fun! I see why it won!
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/30/2024 5:13:00 AM
Thx karen
Date: 4/29/2024 1:00:00 PM
Really enjoyed your creative surreal poem Woody
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/29/2024 1:34:00 PM
Thx Rose
Date: 4/29/2024 10:40:00 AM
What a crazy, topsi-turvy world, Tom - "sleeping or awake?" Nothing is as it seems in the light of the sun! Definitely a place of the surreal. Enjoyed this with my morning tea! So much fun. I especially liked the "candy canes and chocolate drops!" Yummy!! Blessings!
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/29/2024 1:35:00 PM
Yeah mostly nonsense. There may be a lesson in there somewhere. Or not
Date: 4/28/2024 2:27:00 PM
Love this whimsy, surreal piece!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 4/28/2024 4:04:00 PM
Mine was too late, it went quickly!
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/28/2024 3:45:00 PM
Thx. Some of the entries in the contest put mine to shame. Oof! Humbled
Date: 4/28/2024 1:25:00 AM
Wow. Love this! God bless you, love, Gina
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/28/2024 5:07:00 AM
Hey thx
Date: 4/27/2024 7:09:00 PM
Each line more surreal than the next. Sounds very close to a trip I went on once after I took some bad acid. Granted, I didn’t see grandma flying to the moon but the flying dragons and crashing comets definitely. I can see why this won the contest. It’s entertaining, it’s other-worldly, and full of eccentricity. A bit like you, Son of Spock!
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/28/2024 5:06:00 AM
My only goal in life is the attainment of a pure state of logic. Well, and to eat lots of pie
Date: 4/26/2024 9:52:00 AM
Got the idea. 'll try. Have Good Days
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/26/2024 4:33:00 PM
I prefer them thx
Date: 4/26/2024 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win at the library! Surreal indeed!
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/26/2024 4:33:00 PM
Yes ma'am
Date: 4/26/2024 3:15:00 AM
sounds like someone's been at the shrooms lol hmm tulip pie don't think i've ever tried that...
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 4/26/2024 1:00:00 PM
won't argue with that ;)
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/26/2024 5:12:00 AM
It's an acquired taste, like me ;)
Date: 4/26/2024 12:11:00 AM
This is a surreality with a capital S. I have been racking my brains on a song that has almost no meaning, but since I'm not good at rhyme, I had to give up.
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/26/2024 5:11:00 AM
You're a wonderful poet Victor. Thx for visit
Date: 4/25/2024 1:06:00 PM
wow, so cool you won a contest with this one. Great example of surreality.
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/25/2024 6:52:00 PM
Truth be told I tied for first place with someone else. Sigh
Date: 4/25/2024 8:30:00 AM
Hello Tom, What a whirlwind journey through a surreal landscape, where reality and fantasy blur into one. Each line unfolds like a cryptic puzzle, inviting me to ponder the mysteries of existence. Yet, I sense, that amidst the chaos, a sense of uncertainty prevails, echoing the tumultuous nature of life itself. I love how you leave us questioning the boundaries between dreams and reality, inviting introspection into the enigmatic nature of existence. Very Dali-like!! - Blessings, Daniel
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/25/2024 6:52:00 PM
Crystol would agree. Thx Daniel
Date: 4/25/2024 2:34:00 AM
How fun!!! This brought a huge smile to my face. I love thee flow of the rhyme too... the rhythm unmistakable. It's a Salvador Dali painting with words! Truly great, Best, Crystol
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/25/2024 5:23:00 AM
Thanks for appreciating my bit of nonsense :)
Date: 4/24/2024 8:52:00 PM
Indeed a surreal poem interlinking reality and fantasy. An enjoyable read, even though I couldn't make out much. Congratulations on your win, dear Tom though you got it some years back.
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/25/2024 5:23:00 AM
Thx for visit Valsa
Date: 4/24/2024 5:47:00 PM
' whirling, twirling, swirling. ' Sounds like a dream to me, these thoughts tangled within. Different, indeed.
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/25/2024 5:24:00 AM
Much thx Brandy
Date: 4/24/2024 5:06:00 PM
Tom, passed chapters onto a new book, a nice one my friend, image incl., library--me too; only entry, still, I won last place--bravo, and my best always to you both my friends, Aloha, William
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/25/2024 5:25:00 AM
Hello hilo thx for stopping
Date: 4/24/2024 4:59:00 PM
beware the jabberwocky.....damn....he's back. A couple of decades of therapy and decaf should be a good start. Very enjoyable in a very strange kinda way.
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/25/2024 5:24:00 AM
Strange, weird, oddball, gotta love it
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