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Surfing Usa

Beach Boys sounds played as I walked through the door
Gran was smiling as she headed for shore
She shouted out in dismay
As the ironing board gave way
And ended up in a heap on the floor...


Written 17th July 2022
Limerick Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Lisa YY. 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 1/11/2024 4:08:00 PM
Really cute Tom. It's a pleasure for me to see the different ideas and connections you make. I'm laughing now just thinking it over. We just set up a tub bench for my mom. It straddles the tub, she sits on the chair outside the tub, and it slides over to the tub so she can have a shower bath. It's a little like Disney in the bathroom. Our poor elders are starved for amusement in their old age...I hope it doesn't happen to us!!
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Date: 9/28/2022 5:23:00 AM
Hahaha! A bucket full of humour!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/28/2022 7:28:00 AM
Thank you very much JC, I'm happy you enjoyed the humour. Tom
Date: 8/14/2022 12:56:00 AM
I am still smiling from this great Limerick, Tom. Who was the model in your picture?
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Date: 8/14/2022 1:00:00 AM
Lol, someone's granny, it was a pic for the contest and we had to write a limerick for it. Glad you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 8/11/2022 12:37:00 PM
Hello Tom. This is just the entry to lift any spirit. It was fun and in the true fashion of a limerick. Thank you for sharing with us. Blessings...
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Date: 8/11/2022 12:56:00 PM
Thank you very much Lisa I'm happy that you enjoyed it. I hope everything is well with you. Tom
Date: 7/27/2022 9:42:00 AM
I have read of few for this contest, yours is excellent, best of luck. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/27/2022 10:54:00 AM
Thank you very much Jennifer, after listening to the beach boys the idea came from that. Tom
Date: 7/24/2022 10:08:00 PM
After she recovers from her fall, I hope your Surfer Girl gran has Fun, Fun, Fun driving her Little Deuce Coupe. Enjoyed the lim, Tom. Hope all is well ~ John
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Date: 7/24/2022 11:51:00 PM
Lol, thanks John, the beach boys and surfin' go hand in hand. All good with me, I hope you are too. Tom
Date: 7/22/2022 8:16:00 PM
Beautifully implemented, Tom. Your haiku entry unmistakably portrays the scenario with the highest probability of occurring. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 7/23/2022 9:14:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats Lasaad, the beach boys and surfing go hand in hand. Got to praise her for trying. Tom
Date: 7/22/2022 3:15:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Tom, and for have the guts to end it with a fall. I wondered how many of the other entries ended, not well I assumed. lol Have a great weekend my friend, Bill
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Date: 7/23/2022 9:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Bill, I noticed some ended up in similar circumstances lol. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Date: 7/21/2022 10:05:00 AM
I bet this one scored high. it's really good Tom. congrats in the contest
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Date: 7/21/2022 11:01:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats and return visit Andrea Tom
Date: 7/21/2022 6:50:00 AM
Good one Tom, the Beach boys have a lot to answer for, with granny on the floor. Great limerick.
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Date: 7/21/2022 8:34:00 AM
Thank you very much Harry, you cant have surfing without the beach boys lol Tom
Date: 7/20/2022 7:04:00 PM
Tom a Favorite. Just loved this...
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Date: 7/20/2022 11:51:00 PM
Thank you very much Michael, glad you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 7/20/2022 12:51:00 PM
This is definitely what would happen to me if I tried that. Lol Congratulations on your win Tom. My husband was a great surfer when he was younger surfing the huge waves. He used to say that was when he had more guts than brains and stopped surfing the big waves. North shore waves in winter get as high as 36 to 50 feet in size. On occasion our winter waves have topped 100 feet. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/20/2022 12:54:00 PM
Thank you Connie, surfers tackling those high waves never cease to amaze me, not something I'd like to try. Tom
Date: 7/20/2022 12:12:00 PM
Congrats on your win. LOl, do I detect a little iron-y? Robert
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Date: 7/20/2022 12:23:00 PM
Lol thanks for the congrats Robert, Hope you're well. Tom
Date: 7/20/2022 6:42:00 AM
Ironing board did it. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/20/2022 7:37:00 AM
Lol, thank you very much Christuraj. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Date: 7/19/2022 10:30:00 PM
Back to your limerick to congratulate you on your top win Tom !
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Date: 7/20/2022 12:50:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats and return visit Valsa. Tom
Date: 7/19/2022 1:32:00 PM
oh now that's a GREAT job there. HOpe it scored high. Congrats.
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Date: 7/20/2022 12:51:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, it came second in the contest. The beach boys inspired many of us. Tom
Date: 7/19/2022 6:09:00 AM
Well done, Tom. Yours certainly depicts the most likely outcome. Congratulations. Terry
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Date: 7/19/2022 6:56:00 AM
Thank you very much Terry, she hasn't the oomph of your supergran lol. Tom
Date: 7/19/2022 5:33:00 AM
Ah Tom. You never disappoint with your limericks! Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Date: 7/19/2022 6:55:00 AM
Thank you very much Linda, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Hope you're well Tom
Date: 7/19/2022 4:44:00 AM
Tom, your Limerick is a hoot! I really enjoyed! She should meet up with " The Little Old Lady FromPasadena" If you remember that one!!
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Date: 7/19/2022 6:54:00 AM
Thank you very much Mike, yes I certainly do, can't surf but love the beach boys. Enjoy your week ahead. Tom
Date: 7/19/2022 4:12:00 AM
Poor Granny…lol! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/19/2022 6:53:00 AM
Thank you very much Kim, glad you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 7/18/2022 3:57:00 PM
Tom I assure you any beach boy similarities between our Limericks are purely serendipitous, But with such a crazy prompt there are probably a few others as well, all the best for contest, cheers David
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Date: 7/19/2022 12:32:00 AM
Lol, my thoughts are great minds think alike, you cant have surfing without the beach boys. When I put mine on two poems later Janice did, hers was surfin' USA mine surfing USA you couldn't make it up. Hope you're staying cool. Tom
Date: 7/18/2022 10:31:00 AM
OMG ! I love this Tom and the image is hilarious ! Thanks for the laughter . Hugs to you, Susan :)
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Date: 7/18/2022 2:03:00 PM
Thank you Susan, im pleased that you enjoyed the humour. Can't have surfing without the beach boys lol. Tom
Date: 7/18/2022 9:33:00 AM
Hilarious Tom. Crossing my fingers for you, Panagiota xxx
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Date: 7/18/2022 2:01:00 PM
Thank you very much Pangie, glad that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 7/18/2022 6:25:00 AM
A fun Limerick Tom, a groovy on the move, love it… Belle
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/18/2022 9:19:00 AM
Thank you very much Belle, happy you enjoyed it, hope alls well and you're both enjoying the heatwave. Tom
Date: 7/18/2022 1:06:00 AM
Great limerick. It made my day. Best for a win.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/18/2022 5:32:00 AM
Thank you very much Victor, I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Enjoy your week ahead. Tom
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