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Sunset's Goodnight Kiss 1 and 2

Version two, a double tetractys Sun's grandeur says goodnight with bold splashes she embraces our spirits with color. Whispering amen unto all who watch, the curtains pulled, we rest till morning's light. September 28, 2020 Version one in rictameter Daylight waves a goodbye preparing for darkness. Sun graces us with bold colors, relieving our bodies, minds and spirits. Whisp'ring amen to all who watch, she pulls the curtain down and we rest till daylight May 3, 2011

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2020 3:57:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work. Very expressive. Way to go. Sara

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 10/12/2020 10:32:00 PM

Sarah, I welcome your comment with open ears. So glad for your support.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/3/2020 9:39:00 PM

Reason, your lovely poem takes the reader from dusk to dawn on poetic lines of beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 10/6/2020 11:00:00 AM

thanks, Susan, appreciate your commendation and your neat reply.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/2/2020 2:49:00 PM

Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Reason. I love the theme in your, "Sun's Goodnight Kiss “, it has great imagery, and flow. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve"

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 10/2/2020 4:34:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. Appreciate your reply as well as the generous placement in your contest. Blessings on your house!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/2/2020 7:38:00 AM

- A lovely poem, R. A. P. :) - Congratulations on your first place in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 10/2/2020 4:36:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise, your support encourages me to keep on writing.

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/2/2020 7:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning Tetrachtys, Reason.

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 10/2/2020 4:37:00 PM

Appreciate your commendation, Jenna. Have a great weekend.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/2/2020 5:47:00 AM

Very expressive and sweet Reason.Congratulations! Linda

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 10/2/2020 4:40:00 PM

Rétractes are fun and since there is no rhyme required, more expression is possible. Thanks for the read and congratulations.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/29/2020 1:09:00 PM

I just love this. It's a beauty with gentle thoughts flickering throughout. God bless you

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 9/29/2020 8:52:00 PM

thanks, Regina, good to hear from you. Sometimes, one cannot distinguish between sunrises and sunsets.