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Sunset

The far away hills in stark outline Ra's leaving only an orange glow Each second passing beauty sublime With subtle changes the mysteries grow The artist waiting to paint tomorrow

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2011 10:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Francine's "One English Quintain" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 9/6/2011 3:19:00 AM

hey Barbara congrats on your great win..David

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/6/2011 2:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Francine Robert's One English Quintain poetry contest.

Shani Fassbender

Date: 9/5/2011 10:49:00 PM

Barbara, this is beautiful. Congrats on your placement in this contest.

John Freeman

Date: 9/5/2011 9:38:00 PM

Nice job Barbara, Congratulations on a worthy verse. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2011 9:23:00 PM

CONGRATS BG ON ANOTHER GREAT WIN WITH THIS GRAND ENTRY ...

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/5/2011 9:06:00 PM

Very, very pretty Barbara. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/5/2011 8:21:00 PM

congrats on your 8th place win in the contest Barbara, beautifully done

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/1/2011 7:41:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your scene in this one..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/1/2011 10:16:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Barbara. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more soon. Love, Carol

Virginia Mitchell

Date: 9/1/2011 8:54:00 AM

The line,"The artist waiting to paint tomorrow", says much:)

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/1/2011 8:33:00 AM

This is stunning BG :) love it!! Good luck for the contest

Anthony Alexander Valade Adiethylamide

Date: 9/1/2011 8:25:00 AM

Love it :)