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Sundial Bridge

Ordinary words cannot express the glimpse, this strange eclipse of wonder Driving over hills, just north of home, it captures first my curiosity Amid the landlocked green of rolling hills, trees and rocky tundra Could it be, perhaps a sailor gone astray, whose ship has grounded Upon the rocky valley floor....so far from sea? With mast, the sail that hangs so high...pointing sharply to the sky? This mystery of amazing engineering artistry! A bridge!....yet, not so simply said, as to be described as bridge alone A masterpiece, ... as if a giant human hand Arrived upon this northern California land to craft a timepiece A sundial, fit to mock, ...fit to rock your faith in any other clock Where no spring will break, or battery will fail Where motion works a shadow, which will run as silently as the sun With a spire that one can see, for miles north and south, over trees and me... And as the earth rotates the axis on this day I will walk on glass, across the cantilevered span Over river wild, and blue and green where salmon run It gleams as if a giant alabaster sail rules the sea And when there are clouds it will rest, and all night it will sleep When the sun lights the earth, then across the land the time will keep. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . For Brian's Everyman's Ekphrais contest To see a virtual tour of the Sundial Bridge, http://www.virtuar.com/california/sundial/ Or type in Sundial Bridge, Redding, California This bridge is about 25 miles north of my home

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/24/2010 10:39:00 PM
Carrie, Ive walked the bridge and you captured it beautifully..congrats! BG
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Date: 4/21/2010 7:46:00 PM
Congrats Carrie, I have not been there but saw all the hoopla on the ribbon cutting- I will take the V tour for now- Does it really display the time?
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Date: 4/21/2010 12:02:00 PM
Many congratulaions Carrie on your win in Brian's wonderful contest. This bridge is just beautiful, incredible inspiration in the design >> James
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Date: 4/20/2010 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie, on your most worthy poem's success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/20/2010 7:58:00 AM
Hi Carrie. congratulations. I knew this was a winner when I first read it. I can't stay logged in today. I think they still have work to do. I have been trying for hour to get thru my comments on winners and only finished a few.
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Date: 4/20/2010 7:11:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your HM in Brian's contest.. a wonderful honor to add to your growing portfolio of poetry wins..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/11/2010 6:40:00 PM
Many wonderful lines in this poem, seem quite amazing and you did an amazing job in writing it.. best of luck in the contest... love constance
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Date: 4/11/2010 8:46:00 AM
ps. yes, I think Freud would have a ball with us two. haha
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Date: 4/11/2010 8:44:00 AM
wow, this is the most interesting one yet. I am not crazy for reading about structures, (wonder if I can even DO this challenge) but you really captured it and held my interest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/11/2010 12:11:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Carrie.Rgds Brian & congrats on your recent contest successes
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Date: 4/10/2010 9:29:00 PM
Looks like an awesome bridge to me Carrie. Good luck in the competition. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/10/2010 7:39:00 AM
no i changed mine--I saw your poem and thought that was the assignment--then found out different. Mine is achumpkee creek covered bridge. in ga
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Date: 4/10/2010 1:20:00 AM
I continue to be amazed how your verse flows so easy and naturally, Carrie! Sundials!...My father had one in front of his radio station and it totally mesmerized me as a child...I certainly will take that virtual tour you suggested...Sounds like another winner! - Tim
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Date: 4/9/2010 9:54:00 PM
A well penned poem. Wish you good luck in the contest
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Date: 4/9/2010 9:41:00 PM
Nice imagery!
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Date: 4/9/2010 7:35:00 PM
Sounds wonderful. I will look it up on net. You're planning to come to Seattle/ I live about 60 miles North but claim Seattle as mine. We have been having our tulip tour this month but I see they topped the big field across from me today. Sad. Joyce
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Date: 4/9/2010 7:16:00 PM
enjoyed reading today. I will have to check this contest out.
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Date: 4/9/2010 6:59:00 PM
gorgeous poetic art! Carrie! every line filled with splendid imagery! Bravo!!!!! jimbo
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