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Sunday Drive

a long Sunday drive south on a winding beach road to find my poem I listen for profound words from a knowing wind and sea written 3/30/15 for Rick's One New Tanka Contest

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Date: 4/18/2015 2:37:00 PM
Wonderful win Rhonda, always & forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/18/2015 12:19:00 PM
Rhonda:) Congratulations, on your awesome Tanka win. SKAT
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Date: 4/11/2015 8:22:00 AM
Returning back to say congrats!
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Date: 4/10/2015 12:04:00 AM
Hope you are well and that I will get an email one day!
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Date: 4/10/2015 12:03:00 AM
I'm glad Rick placed this one. I'd have put it higher. One of my faves in the contest!!
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Date: 4/8/2015 7:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win Rhonda!
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Date: 4/8/2015 11:03:00 AM
My favorite among these including my own, a great tanka for writers in general. Well-done Rhonda, a clear picture from two angles, nature included.
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Date: 4/7/2015 6:16:00 PM
Oh I love this.......and would have placed it higher !!! I have often found a poem, on just such a drive!! :)
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Date: 4/7/2015 6:08:00 PM
Beautifully written, Rhonda. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/7/2015 5:08:00 PM
Glad that you found this winner..Congrats!!Sara
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Date: 4/7/2015 4:52:00 PM
Rhonda, back to congratulate you on this descriptive tanka win . Blessings Eve
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Date: 4/7/2015 4:20:00 PM
Rhonda, it seems the poem found you. Beautifully done, congrats on the win.
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Date: 4/7/2015 4:02:00 PM
Congratulations, Rhonda, on your nice win. Yes, our inspiration comes from the beauty and peace of nature. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/7/2015 11:58:00 AM
beautiful write Rhonda - I can relate to this I often sit near the sea for inspiration:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/7/2015 10:31:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win, Rhonda! Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 4/7/2015 9:04:00 AM
Beautiful write Rhonda...Congrats on your win...
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Date: 4/4/2015 7:45:00 AM
Fantastic! I love the image of driving somewhere to find the poem.
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Date: 4/3/2015 10:36:00 AM
Incredible Tanka! I think you locked this one up. Good luck with the sponsor of this contest.
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Date: 4/1/2015 2:05:00 PM
gosh, i wish you had entered this one in MY contest. It is so nice, Rhonda. Knowing Rick a little bit, I think he will like this one too.
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Date: 3/31/2015 12:56:00 AM
I too love Sunday drive. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 3/31/2015 12:15:00 AM
I love the sound of both the ocean and winds blowing too...very lovely... Hugs, Deb
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Date: 3/30/2015 10:29:00 PM
love it, to be able to capture the sense of feel out of the whisper of the wind and the sea. a 7 Blessings dear friend
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Date: 3/30/2015 9:09:00 PM
Yes, trees are wise and the ocean has been here since the beginning...what stories they hold...nicely written poem :)
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