Summer's Fall

Summer’s Fall


Slow bleeding trees stand,
pallbearers to a failing Summer’s
last warm, moist breath.
Cold moon casts shadows into
early darkness, on flowers shivering
in chilling soil.  Thus does Autumn’s
beauty shield us from our pain.


John G. Lawless
9/6/2014
for PD’s One Autumn Night(in just 7 lines) – Poetry Contest
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Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 11:50 PM
gorgeous and DEEP. A FAVE for me, and congrats for your win.
Yvonne Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 1:58 PM
This is just stunning John another fav for me. Congratulations on your well deserved win!
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 12:57 PM
you painted a wonderful scene - many congrats:-) Hugs jan x
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 12:00 PM
congratulations John on your fine win, well done
Ebbs Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 11:30 AM
Very nice, I never thought the changing colors of leaves as bleeding. You have created a new thought within me, thank you. Congrats :)
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December 27, 2014 at 9:55 AM
John, Congratulations on your top win, in my Autumn Night's contest. A blessing it is to be back. I love nothing more than a free feeling of falling leaves drifting away at night. Thank you for the supporting one of my many soup contest. Stop by my latest blog "Together Alone" if you'd like. No problem if you don't have time. Just take this time and enjoy your win... LOVE LINDA
La France Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 5:48 PM
Oh John, I love this poem, you have painted a wonderful picture with words, I am sure it will do very well in the contest ~~
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 1:03 PM
WOW, this is stunning imagery and figurative language. I love it, John!! About River walk, if you google this place in San Antonio ,Texas, you can learn about parades they have on the river and I imagine one can see bright flowers sometimes floating past them on those floats!! I think I need to make a note about that under my haiku so people will know what I am talking about!!
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September 5, 2014 at 11:25 PM
I do so love Autumn. Wonderful poem. Love and prayers, Gina
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