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Summer Wind of Sea

Bless me with the magic you possess, wafting balm of coolness through the air. Summer wind of sea, erase my stress as I languish beachside in this chair. Wafting balm of coolness through the air, soothe my mind and breathe sweet peace to me. As I languish beachside in this chair, whisper in my ear . . . tranquility. Soothe my mind and breathe sweet peace to me. Fan my sun-drenched face, oh, gentle breeze. Whisper in my ear. . . tranquility. Do refresh! I’m feeling so at ease. Fan my sun-drenched face, oh, gentle breeze. Summer wind of sea, erase my stress. Do refresh! I’m feeling so at ease. Bless me with the magic you possess! By Andrea Dietrich Motif: Nature

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Nandita Das

Date: 4/24/2016 7:42:00 AM

Awesome. What magic you possess! Such a joy to read your lovely poems. Thank you.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/5/2014 12:08:00 PM

Hi congratulations Andy love I may not be commenting much but still reading xx

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 2/5/2014 9:39:00 AM

Congrats on your well deserved win Andrea. Kayod5.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/4/2014 9:43:00 PM

Andrea it's an amazing write! Congrats on great win !!

Joseph May

Date: 2/4/2014 6:13:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Andrea

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 4/11/2011 8:36:00 AM

A beautiful write, so full of inner peace. I enjoyed the read. Best to you in the contest. Caryl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/27/2011 3:37:00 AM

wow, i haven;t read this before, my girl... it sure is a great piece so lyrical and eloquent... applause too for making it to the intl soup rounds along with your other super works! go and get the trophy with huggs:) nette

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 3/13/2011 10:33:00 AM

Dear Andrea Congrats on two of your elegant poems making through the first round of competition. Wish you success in the finals. -Mohammad

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/11/2011 2:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your coming through first round...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/9/2011 5:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry X 3 making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Andrea. Love Carol

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/7/2011 10:20:00 AM

great to read your words today Andrea all my very best.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 6:11:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv..

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/4/2011 5:39:00 PM

Ahh this one tkes me away from the winter scene....I like this 'mini vacation' !!

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 1/4/2011 5:03:00 PM

Congrats on the feature. Wish I was there in that chair. Had a love affair with the ocean since I was a kid. Vince

Constance La France

Date: 1/3/2011 12:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your "featured poem" Andrea. The Pantoum is not an easy form to write and you did ~EXCELLENT~ it is just magical' ~~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/3/2011 5:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Andrea. Love, Carol

Daver Austin

Date: 1/3/2011 4:57:00 AM

I like this one a lot, Andrea. The Pantoum is interesting to me because it is constantly, like your poem, refreshing - so, of course, the choice of form. Congrats on the pick. Love, Dave

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/2/2011 3:50:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a wonderful one to share with us all today my friend with luv..

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/16/2010 9:53:00 AM

I need some of that magical sea air. I can feel me relaxing sitting on the beach. Thanks for reading some of my earlier poems. It is nice to know if a person has grown over the years in their writing. Phyl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/14/2010 7:47:00 PM

Andrea, "wow! your spell bounding words are captured perfect in this poem. A little sad with happy and beautiful emotions to go through with all them deep thoughts. But, like you said at the end, ( bless me with the magic you possess! )I really did enjoyed the ending. take care,..p.d.

Jerri Ward

Date: 9/8/2010 7:01:00 PM

I forgot to vote.

Jerri Ward

Date: 9/8/2010 7:00:00 PM

Andrea, This is a really great write. I could feel the breeze all over me. Thank you for commenting on my work. Jerri

Maya Zee

Date: 9/5/2010 3:39:00 PM

NICE WORK!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/5/2010 6:09:00 AM

Don't know how I missed this wondeful piece of art you have penned... Excellent... LuvMichael

Rinki Nandy

Date: 9/3/2010 12:15:00 PM

Best wishes for the contest Andrea, relaxing on a summer day, soothing breeze can do wonders to the senses, its magical. ye, i watch those dance shows, i love dance although i am not a dancer. i understand you like b'wood dance n yes it is good as long as it symbolises indian dance forms.