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Summer Snow Angels - Collaboration With Darren White

Spring rain, and I am flat on the lawn: arms spread, laughing loud. I create snow angels without snow, daisies watch with undisguised surprise. Like the day, I dream in wild red of strawberries bursting on my tongue; petal feathers, pure radiance: sun in sprinklers reflected prismatic rainbow rain shower painting chromatic arrays sing the summer colors painted winter's grey goodbye fly to the heavens on sunshine rays

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/2/2017 11:13:00 AM

Lovely...full of joy and light. Great collab, you tw.

Sara Ella
Date: 6/2/2017 11:23:00 AM

Thank you Eileen :) Darren is the expert and we had fun creating this one.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/2/2017 6:21:00 AM

- Beautiful from both of you, Sara & Darren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Ella
Date: 6/2/2017 6:38:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise :) We had fun writing it! Hugs back <3

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/26/2017 10:44:00 PM

Haven't been around as much but what a joy to read this lovely poem! Great collab you guys!!

Darren White
Date: 5/27/2017 9:35:00 AM

Thanks Art :) We loved writing this.

Sara Ella
Date: 5/27/2017 6:45:00 AM

Thank you Arthur :)

Tim Smith

Date: 5/26/2017 11:09:00 AM

Wow guys awesome....a fave

Darren White
Date: 5/27/2017 9:35:00 AM

Weeee, fav, thanks my friend :)

Sara Ella
Date: 5/26/2017 1:45:00 PM

Thank you Tim :) YOU are awesome, my friend :D

Chris Green

Date: 5/26/2017 6:29:00 AM

This is beautiful, a true feel good poem from two wonderful poets. I love the scene you have created here and I can see it clearly. This was really fun to read and imagine. Great job Sara and Darren. This is something to be proud of.

Darren White
Date: 5/27/2017 9:34:00 AM

And we are, it was lovely to write together :)

Sara Ella
Date: 5/26/2017 1:38:00 PM

Thank you Chris :) I am so glad that you enjoyed our poem :D

White Wolf

Date: 5/26/2017 3:29:00 AM

This is beautiful! Well done guys!

Darren White
Date: 5/27/2017 9:33:00 AM

Heya Budge, thanks mate!

Sara Ella
Date: 5/26/2017 5:06:00 AM

Thank you Budgie :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/26/2017 3:28:00 AM

oh wow what a fun poem love the imagery of the snow angels without the snow but don't think I will practice in the rain - a real feel good poem Sara and Darren:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White
Date: 5/27/2017 9:32:00 AM

Pfft Jan, spoilsport ;)

Sara Ella
Date: 5/26/2017 5:17:00 AM

Thank you Jan :) I am thinking that snow angels would be more fun to make on a sunny day too!

Darren White

Date: 5/26/2017 1:20:00 AM

Loved writing this with you my friend, we created a happy poem together <3 :)

Sara Ella
Date: 5/26/2017 1:25:00 AM

This was fun! :D Thank you <3