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Summer Snow Angels - Collaboration with Darren White

Spring rain, and I am flat on the lawn: arms spread, laughing loud. I create snow angels without snow, daisies watch with undisguised surprise. Like the day, I dream in wild red of strawberries bursting on my tongue; petal feathers, pure radiance: sun in sprinklers reflected prismatic rainbow rain shower painting chromatic arrays sing the summer colors painted winter's grey goodbye fly to the heavens on sunshine rays

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/2/2017 11:13:00 AM
Lovely...full of joy and light. Great collab, you tw.
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/2/2017 11:23:00 AM
Thank you Eileen :) Darren is the expert and we had fun creating this one.
Date: 6/2/2017 6:21:00 AM
- Beautiful from both of you, Sara & Darren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/2/2017 6:38:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise :) We had fun writing it! Hugs back <3
Date: 5/26/2017 10:44:00 PM
Haven't been around as much but what a joy to read this lovely poem! Great collab you guys!!
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Darren White
Date: 5/27/2017 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Art :) We loved writing this.
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Sara Ella
Date: 5/27/2017 6:45:00 AM
Thank you Arthur :)
Date: 5/26/2017 11:09:00 AM
Wow guys awesome....a fave
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Darren White
Date: 5/27/2017 9:35:00 AM
Weeee, fav, thanks my friend :)
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Sara Ella
Date: 5/26/2017 1:45:00 PM
Thank you Tim :) YOU are awesome, my friend :D
Date: 5/26/2017 6:29:00 AM
This is beautiful, a true feel good poem from two wonderful poets. I love the scene you have created here and I can see it clearly. This was really fun to read and imagine. Great job Sara and Darren. This is something to be proud of.
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Darren White
Date: 5/27/2017 9:34:00 AM
And we are, it was lovely to write together :)
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Sara Ella
Date: 5/26/2017 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Chris :) I am so glad that you enjoyed our poem :D
Date: 5/26/2017 3:29:00 AM
This is beautiful! Well done guys!
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Darren White
Date: 5/27/2017 9:33:00 AM
Heya Budge, thanks mate!
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Sara Ella
Date: 5/26/2017 5:06:00 AM
Thank you Budgie :)
Date: 5/26/2017 3:28:00 AM
oh wow what a fun poem love the imagery of the snow angels without the snow but don't think I will practice in the rain - a real feel good poem Sara and Darren:-) hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 5/27/2017 9:32:00 AM
Pfft Jan, spoilsport ;)
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Sara Ella
Date: 5/26/2017 5:17:00 AM
Thank you Jan :) I am thinking that snow angels would be more fun to make on a sunny day too!
Date: 5/26/2017 1:20:00 AM
Loved writing this with you my friend, we created a happy poem together <3 :)
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Sara Ella
Date: 5/26/2017 1:25:00 AM
This was fun! :D Thank you <3