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Summer Snow Angels - Collaboration With Darren White

Spring rain, and I am flat on the lawn:
arms spread, laughing loud.
I create snow angels without snow,
daisies watch with undisguised surprise.

Like the day, I dream in wild red of
strawberries bursting on my tongue;
petal feathers, pure radiance:
sun in sprinklers reflected prismatic rainbow

rain shower painting chromatic arrays
sing the summer colors
painted winter's grey goodbye
fly to the heavens on sunshine rays

Copyright © Sara Ella | Year Posted 2017

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Eileen Manassian Date: 6/2/2017 11:13:00 AM Lovely...full of joy and light. Great collab, you tw. Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 6/2/2017 11:23:00 AM Thank you Eileen :) Darren is the expert and we had fun creating this one.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/2/2017 6:21:00 AM - Beautiful from both of you, Sara & Darren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 6/2/2017 6:38:00 AM Thank you Anne-Lise :) We had fun writing it! Hugs back <3

Arthur Vaso Date: 5/26/2017 10:44:00 PM Haven't been around as much but what a joy to read this lovely poem! Great collab you guys!! Login to Reply Darren White Date: 5/27/2017 9:35:00 AM Thanks Art :) We loved writing this. Sara Ella Date: 5/27/2017 6:45:00 AM Thank you Arthur :)

Tim Smith Date: 5/26/2017 11:09:00 AM Wow guys awesome....a fave Login to Reply Darren White Date: 5/27/2017 9:35:00 AM Weeee, fav, thanks my friend :) Sara Ella Date: 5/26/2017 1:45:00 PM Thank you Tim :) YOU are awesome, my friend :D

Chris Green Date: 5/26/2017 6:29:00 AM This is beautiful, a true feel good poem from two wonderful poets. I love the scene you have created here and I can see it clearly. This was really fun to read and imagine. Great job Sara and Darren. This is something to be proud of. Login to Reply Darren White Date: 5/27/2017 9:34:00 AM And we are, it was lovely to write together :) Sara Ella Date: 5/26/2017 1:38:00 PM Thank you Chris :) I am so glad that you enjoyed our poem :D

White Wolf Date: 5/26/2017 3:29:00 AM This is beautiful! Well done guys! Login to Reply Darren White Date: 5/27/2017 9:33:00 AM Heya Budge, thanks mate! Sara Ella Date: 5/26/2017 5:06:00 AM Thank you Budgie :)

Jan Allison Date: 5/26/2017 3:28:00 AM oh wow what a fun poem love the imagery of the snow angels without the snow but don't think I will practice in the rain - a real feel good poem Sara and Darren:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Darren White Date: 5/27/2017 9:32:00 AM Pfft Jan, spoilsport ;) Sara Ella Date: 5/26/2017 5:17:00 AM Thank you Jan :) I am thinking that snow angels would be more fun to make on a sunny day too!

Darren White Date: 5/26/2017 1:20:00 AM Loved writing this with you my friend, we created a happy poem together <3 :) Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 5/26/2017 1:25:00 AM This was fun! :D Thank you <3