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Summer Love: Parting At Equinox

The equinox has come to even out the nights and days and make them equal length. I lie here now, as always, most devout, but Sun, my love, you are so losing strength! It used to be in early afternoon we two would meet . . . your passion at its peak. I played as if I were your small cocoon enveloped by your heat, which now grows weak. Oh, Sun, I miss those times your ardor surged for hours on end. I, prostrate, took you in. And later, close to evening, I emerged - your monarch, tinged with scarlet for our sin. Your vigor that I crave now dissipates. Farewell! For your return your mistress waits! May 16, 2018

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Date: 6/2/2018 10:02:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved top win, Andrea.
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Date: 5/23/2018 9:37:00 AM
Great write and win Andrea...Congrats
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Date: 5/23/2018 8:56:00 AM
I commented on this beautiful sonnet before, Andrea. A winner in any contest. Many congrats. Elaine
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Date: 5/23/2018 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Andrea :)
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Date: 5/23/2018 2:18:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your great win.
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Date: 5/23/2018 2:09:00 AM
Another gem Andrea, you have been busy. Congratulations. Tom
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Date: 5/23/2018 1:36:00 AM
Congratulations on you 1st place win! Your sonnet is very vivid.
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Date: 5/22/2018 8:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win! Creative sonnet theme. Enjoyed this.
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Date: 5/22/2018 5:39:00 PM
What a beautiful, heartfelt sonnet. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/22/2018 4:34:00 PM
Lovely Sonnet, Andrea. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/18/2018 6:41:00 AM
We have Frying Pan Shoals here off of North Carolina. What if we were to surpass the gas, And would end up all over the glass; Like a lark; Did embark; Was found out of our life finally alas.
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Date: 5/17/2018 12:59:00 PM
The mistress of the sun awaits his return. Nicely done, Andrea, best of luck. John
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Date: 5/17/2018 11:13:00 AM
Nice, you already know I can't write like this, it's true poetry in light of all the bumers  you manage to keep your positive self ,
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Date: 5/17/2018 9:14:00 AM
You did this so well Andrea. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/17/2018 2:56:00 AM
Wow! What a unique and creative take on the theme of summer love, Andrea. I love it! Elaine
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Date: 5/16/2018 10:15:00 PM
Great Sonnet Andrea :)... I love summer too!...but it just got here, I don't even want to think of winter for at least three more months :0 I know you don't always get your replies, so thought I'd say I have a cat story in my short stories that you might like if you have the time :)
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Date: 5/16/2018 8:31:00 PM
The sun is still shining bringing us hope. Good luck in the contest. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/16/2018 7:01:00 PM
Very lovely! Beautiful writing, Andrea. You are indeed a gifted writer.
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Date: 5/16/2018 6:16:00 PM
absolutely stunning sonnet Andrea, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/16/2018 4:09:00 PM
this is one of your best poems, andrea! i love everything about it. it feels like a poem that should become a classic that english majors should study...
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Date: 5/16/2018 1:50:00 PM
You aptly make use of the sun to describe the ardent passion of summer love, Andrea (even to the point of getting sunburnt:) Love both your rhythm and rhyme. Regards // paul
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Date: 5/16/2018 1:15:00 PM
Love your metaphoric love affair Andrea. Very original!
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Date: 5/16/2018 11:56:00 AM
Lovely sonnet Andrea..a unique take on the contest theme..best for a BIG win!
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Date: 5/16/2018 10:56:00 AM
What a summer love... surely missed during cold winters... All the best Andrea
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Date: 5/16/2018 10:00:00 AM
using the monarch butterfly is inspired...really like this one...good luck
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