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Summer Fling

putrid air pressing down hot and wet heavy weight on my head, my shoulders hard to breathe muddled thoughts stooped body, stupid mind dripping brow stinging eyes tasting salt on my lips dragging feet slow to speak languished heart beating slow awkward thoughts start to grow timid touch on moist grass swirling clouds high above dripping rain gentle tears through soft hair on my face rainbow smile now aglow 07/31/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/29/2016 9:01:00 PM
Back with my congrats James :)-luloo
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James Inman
Date: 9/30/2016 12:49:00 PM
Thank you Laura.
Date: 8/28/2016 10:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your verse and your win. Joyce
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James Inman
Date: 8/29/2016 10:41:00 AM
Thank you Joyce.
Date: 8/27/2016 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations James...
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James Inman
Date: 8/27/2016 12:14:00 PM
Thank you Charlie.
Date: 8/27/2016 9:42:00 AM
Congrats!!! Sara
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James Inman
Date: 8/27/2016 12:14:00 PM
Thank you Sara.
Date: 8/26/2016 10:02:00 PM
Congrats James!
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James Inman
Date: 8/27/2016 12:13:00 PM
Thanks Edward.
Date: 8/2/2016 7:13:00 PM
Nicely done, James, like the transition to a bright ending. Good luck, regards, Viv
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Date: 8/1/2016 5:24:00 PM
Excellent James! 7+
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James Inman
Date: 8/2/2016 7:31:00 AM
Thank you Laura.
Date: 7/31/2016 2:08:00 PM
James, perfect for the contest! good luck :)-luloo
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James Inman
Date: 7/31/2016 5:40:00 PM
Thank you Laura.

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