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Summer Enchanting

The morning sun arising into view, Sends forth his rays to warm each butterfly. He quickly shines his light to sparkle dew. Then, paints the earth with beauty from on high. Sunflowers raise their heads up to the sky. Then, bumblebees into the flowers sink. They have their fill of nature’s precious drink. A child with ribbons flowing from her dress, Runs laughing through a field with flowers thick. True love, or not, those petals will confess. She fills small hands with dandelions, quick. Then, runs beside her favorite bubbling creek. And sits upon a rock, to one by one, Pluck petals from the bloom ‘til love is won. He loves me; he loves me not; he loves me, He loves me not; sweetly she chimes with smiles. Those yellow flowers quickly shall decree, What fate befalls her love as fancy wiles! Soon charms of fallen petals, trust beguiles. Until the yellow roses sent from him, Reclaims the passion lost upon this whim. Ó February 8, 2014 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: Here Comes the Sun Sponsored by Francine Roberts

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Date: 3/1/2014 10:49:00 PM
It's so good to see you lately on the winner lists!! You are really getting back into things and writing a wonderful poem like this is evidence of it. BIG congrats.
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 3/15/2014 9:53:00 PM
Oh my. Where did all the time go? Thank you for stopping by to leave your comments. Between work and planting (400 strawberry plants) I have been a slacker about responding. It is always nice to hear from you. Big Smiles, Dane Ann
Date: 3/1/2014 10:41:00 PM
Congrats on the win Dane . No doubt, a great one is this. You are a Champion.
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 3/15/2014 9:55:00 PM
Tine flies when your planting 400 strawberries, working, visiting grandchildren, and going to a beehive seminar. So sorry that I took so long in responding to your very kind words. Thank you very much for reading and commenting. Big Smiles, Dane Ann
Date: 3/1/2014 8:02:00 PM
Beguiling read. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 3/15/2014 9:56:00 PM
Thank you for your congratulations, Joyce. I hope all is well with you and that you have a wonderful week ahead! Big Smiles, Dane Ann
Date: 3/1/2014 5:12:00 PM
congrats Dane on your win with this yellow masterpiece
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 3/15/2014 9:49:00 PM
Thank you, Francine for stopping by and leaving your kind words. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

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