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Sublime

To be in clover as the soft wind blows - my love beside me underneath blue sky. Each minute as it quickly comes and goes we give no thought to, for in love we lie with scent of meadow flowers in the air. We watch the clouds drift, naming forms we see. Tranquility and gladness find us there. No other place would I prefer to be. His arms enwrap me as it’s growing cold. His eyes meet mine; I shiver with delight. Behind a mountain slides the sun - once gold. The moon appears. It rises with the night, and passion in our own souls starts to climb. Can any day be any more sublime?

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Date: 4/16/2023 5:29:00 AM
congratulations on this very sweet and heartfelt write.
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Date: 4/13/2023 8:36:00 PM
Great sonnet of love. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/13/2023 7:26:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your first place win in Constance’s contest with this beautiful sonnet Andrea… Belle
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Date: 4/13/2023 5:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win in the Contest...Andrea
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Date: 4/12/2023 2:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fabulous romantic poem Andrea. :)
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Date: 4/12/2023 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations on First Place, Andrea! Your poem is so sweet and gentle and sublime!
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Date: 4/12/2023 9:56:00 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge, love how you combine nature and love, congratulations !
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Date: 4/12/2023 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I really enjoyed it. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Date: 4/12/2023 8:54:00 AM
- Congratulations on 1st place in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs
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Date: 4/11/2023 3:27:00 AM
Good Morning Andrea. What a wonderful way to start the day with such a gorgeous entry. Wonderful sonnet aside, this entry is truly beautiful in my eyes and ears too. It has all poetic elements attached including the emotive factor. Allow me to say contest aside this entry stands on its own and yes, never did you waiver from your title. Thank you for sharing such an entry. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings always (smile)
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Date: 4/10/2023 6:34:00 PM
Nice sonnet, Andrea. Good luck!
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Date: 4/10/2023 8:11:00 AM
So sweet, such good rhyme. A good portrait of a beautiful day.
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Date: 4/10/2023 7:49:00 AM
No day could be more sublime Andrea, a beautiful sonnet filled with romace… Belle
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Date: 4/10/2023 6:41:00 AM
- Lovely and romantic, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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