'stars'

stars sometimes unnoticed sheltered by clouds a beauty hidden my imagination at times the only compass on a clear night they bring me hope spellbound by their continued sparkle I wish I could reach out and touch them By: Wilma Neels ©120220121640

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David Scott

Date: 6/27/2013 12:24:00 PM

LIKE YOUR POEM I WRITE ONE CALLED STARS ALSO ON THIS XX DAVIDSCOTT

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/16/2012 5:17:00 AM

Congratulations Wilma Beautiful xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/15/2012 11:41:00 PM

Beautiful, Wilma! Congrats on your win. Blessings, Rhonda

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/15/2012 4:55:00 PM

Wilma, awesome etheree. Congrats on your 1st place win in Linda-Marie's contest...................S.Ronthorpe

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/15/2012 1:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Wilma. Fine form etheree.

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/15/2012 12:09:00 PM

I love the input of the compass, and the hope that stars hold for you...a lovely poem, Wilma! Congratulations!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/15/2012 11:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Linda Marie's "Poetic Art" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/15/2012 9:39:00 AM

congrats ilma on first place win for this sensitive loving write ..thankxxx..

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 2/12/2012 11:10:00 AM

Lovely and nice poem! I to wish that I could reach out to the stars and touch them, sometimes I feel like doing the same with "fluffy" clouds to! oxoxo love Laila

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/12/2012 10:10:00 AM

thankxx for supporting my contest Wilma ..this is a grand champion luv.. it is almost 8 pm here and not as hot but little chilly still in low 60's but NJ had snow yesterday my sons telll me.. do not miss that luv.. bbbrrr..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/12/2012 9:49:00 AM

brilliant imagery Wilma amd one could almost feel u reaching to touch those lovely vibrant stars.. hope u entered into my contest luv.. it is fantastic piece...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2012 9:37:00 AM

good morning..nice poem...pd

Kash Poet

Date: 2/12/2012 7:56:00 AM

Very good Etheree.You have drawn a beautiful night sky.Best wishes if for contest.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/12/2012 7:55:00 AM

If you can't touch them they will always shine over your heart.... That is for sure... Hello luv!!! I have missed you and your work.... luv and long hugs Michael