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Starry Love

Time moves on forward fast,
Like rapids hurtling unheedingly headlong
Towards a sheer deep cascade,
And plummet down below in a mighty roar
To flow relentlessly towards the infinite sea
Drifting straight into eternal oblivion.
Yet time can ne'er erase all memories,
And special ones will always linger 
In the obscure corridors of my mind.
Hence I can never forget my dear,
The night that we first met.
Were not that night the stars conspiring
To throw a luminous light on our love?
Did not the twinkling stars shoot out their ways
In the clear expanse of nightly sky?
 
There under a lonely carob tree,
Where dry old leaves crackled
Under our woollen spreads,
You smiled graciously at me
And suddenly I knew
How eager was I for a love so true.
 
We were like two of those gems above,
Shooting their way across the skies.
And fate decreed that those two stars should meet
In an astral collision and fuse into a lasting blast.
Light sparkled above sublimely
An ethereal fireworks display,
That lasted  for one long memorable moment,
But the light in our love will last 
Until the end of our days.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ricci Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 9:15 AM
Victor Victor Victor - I read this entry slowly to savor the emotive element and such grace and beauty. Love never gets old. Yes Victor you can tell a story and place us readers in the scene. Thank you for always sharing. Have a wonderful night. Blessings always.
Kendrick Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 1:24 PM
Very passionately described poetic lines. It was a night to remember, and you have. I enjoyed reading your passionate and descriptive work. Your visits to my pages were uplifting. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 7:28 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A beautiful write and picture. Have a blessed day writing away.................
Skelly Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 3:14 AM
Congratulations Victor, well done...Delice
Roper Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 10:48 PM
Back with Congratulations on POTD
George Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 10:02 PM
Victor, once again back to your poem with congratulations on it being chosen as POTD
Nicole Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 6:04 PM
Those tender moments and memories, will always be safe in your heart. This is beautiful, romantic and emotional, all at the same time. Your thoughts caress softly around me. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
Allison Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 4:34 PM
beautiful and romantic, many congrats on POTD Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 4:09 PM
Lovely romantic write Victor, Congrats on POTD
Jones Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 2:53 PM
Lovely potd congrats!
La France Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 2:30 PM
Victor, beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~peace and tranquility _Constance
Sands Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 1:55 PM
Beautiful POTD. Congratulations :)
Mcintosh Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 1:26 PM
Beautifully done. Congrats on POTD. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Peck Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 10:37 AM
A poem filled with love ~ so lovely to read. Congratulations on POTD.
Ashley Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 10:32 AM
Dear Victor, such intimate beauty spills from your romantic pen. Such a great and exquisite love.. a starry love, indeed! Congratulations for receiving POTD honors, my friend. A worthy and delectable choice! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gilmour Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 10:05 AM
Congratulations dear Victor on getting POTD my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Jayasankar Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 7:29 AM
Hearty congratulations on your well deserved POTD with this beautiful write Victor... your poem sparkles... God bless... ~ Ani
Rodrigues Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Victor!
Pandit Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 5:25 AM
Back with congrats Victor on POTD. Enjoy your day.
Lane Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 5:14 AM
Two stars colliding and fusing as one... What a romantic thought, Victor! Nice choice for a POTD.
Gentile Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 5:08 AM
Victor, this is such a beautiful tribute to love and so very worthy of your POTD honors, congratulations !!
Proxenos Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 3:51 AM
Hi Victor congratulations on a great write and for being awarded POTD. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Seeker Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 2:53 AM
Back again to congratulate you on POTD, Victor!
Cunningham Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 12:49 AM
Back with congratulations Victor on POTD, enjoy the honour and your weekend. Tom
Roper Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 6:59 PM
I love the line, "two stars should meet In an astral collision and fuse into a lasting blast." a life time of love. great verse dear friend. Hope you are doing ok.
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