Get Your Premium Membership

Starry Love

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Victor Buhagiar.


Time moves on forward fast, Like rapids hurtling unheedingly headlong Towards a sheer deep cascade, And plummet down below in a mighty roar To flow relentlessly towards the infinite sea Drifting straight into eternal oblivion. Yet time can ne'er erase all memories, And special ones will always linger In the obscure corridors of my mind. Hence I can never forget my dear, The night that we first met. Were not that night the stars conspiring To throw a luminous light on our love? Did not the twinkling stars shoot out their ways In the clear expanse of nightly sky? There under a lonely carob tree, Where dry old leaves crackled Under our woollen spreads, You smiled graciously at me And suddenly I knew How eager was I for a love so true. We were like two of those gems above, Shooting their way across the skies. And fate decreed that those two stars should meet In an astral collision and fuse into a lasting blast. Light sparkled above sublimely An ethereal fireworks display, That lasted for one long memorable moment, But the light in our love will last Until the end of our days.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 12/6/2021 9:15:00 AM
Victor Victor Victor - I read this entry slowly to savor the emotive element and such grace and beauty. Love never gets old. Yes Victor you can tell a story and place us readers in the scene. Thank you for always sharing. Have a wonderful night. Blessings always.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/1/2021 1:24:00 PM
Very passionately described poetic lines. It was a night to remember, and you have. I enjoyed reading your passionate and descriptive work. Your visits to my pages were uplifting. Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 11/29/2021 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A beautiful write and picture. Have a blessed day writing away.................
Login to Reply
Date: 11/28/2021 3:14:00 AM
Congratulations Victor, well done...Delice
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 10:48:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on POTD
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 10:02:00 PM
Victor, once again back to your poem with congratulations on it being chosen as POTD
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 6:04:00 PM
Those tender moments and memories, will always be safe in your heart. This is beautiful, romantic and emotional, all at the same time. Your thoughts caress softly around me. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 4:34:00 PM
beautiful and romantic, many congrats on POTD Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 4:09:00 PM
Lovely romantic write Victor, Congrats on POTD
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 2:53:00 PM
Lovely potd congrats!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 2:30:00 PM
Victor, beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~peace and tranquility _Constance
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 1:55:00 PM
Beautiful POTD. Congratulations :)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 1:26:00 PM
Beautifully done. Congrats on POTD. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 10:37:00 AM
A poem filled with love ~ so lovely to read. Congratulations on POTD.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 10:32:00 AM
Dear Victor, such intimate beauty spills from your romantic pen. Such a great and exquisite love.. a starry love, indeed! Congratulations for receiving POTD honors, my friend. A worthy and delectable choice! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations dear Victor on getting POTD my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 7:29:00 AM
Hearty congratulations on your well deserved POTD with this beautiful write Victor... your poem sparkles... God bless... ~ Ani
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Victor!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 5:25:00 AM
Back with congrats Victor on POTD. Enjoy your day.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 5:14:00 AM
Two stars colliding and fusing as one... What a romantic thought, Victor! Nice choice for a POTD.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 5:08:00 AM
Victor, this is such a beautiful tribute to love and so very worthy of your POTD honors, congratulations !!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 3:51:00 AM
Hi Victor congratulations on a great write and for being awarded POTD. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 2:53:00 AM
Back again to congratulate you on POTD, Victor!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2021 12:49:00 AM
Back with congratulations Victor on POTD, enjoy the honour and your weekend. Tom
Login to Reply
Date: 11/26/2021 6:59:00 PM
I love the line, "two stars should meet In an astral collision and fuse into a lasting blast." a life time of love. great verse dear friend. Hope you are doing ok.
Login to Reply
12

Book: Reflection on the Important Things