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A Poem against Child Abuse

Illicit act in a terrible hire boundary of age, not taken with respect innocence of this being yet to retire adult mind, considering a bad prospect affection on this account comes with fire even when sweet, good is in no aspect strength of morals, reaching a point to tire the lamb becomes a beast when you least expect a criminal act even with a permit mindset of the minor turning tropical into future living, the feeling transmit a heart with bad memories becomes vocal a silent torture still commands a submit biting others, thinking its reciprocal

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/11/2016 10:00:00 AM

"a heart with bad memories becomes vocal a silent torture still commands a submit biting others, thinking its reciprocal"..I especially liked these lines..We can't understand a person until we know where they came from in life..Sara

Funom Makama
Date: 3/11/2016 10:45:00 AM

Thank you so much Sara Kendrick

David Aaron

Date: 3/8/2016 1:18:00 AM

Such beautiful writing about a dark subject. This poem is also a stark reminder that abuse comes in so many forms, in so many ways. A brilliant poem.

Funom Makama
Date: 3/11/2016 10:45:00 AM

Thank you so much David Aaron

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/7/2016 6:35:00 PM

Dear Funom Intriguing is the correct word for this piece, a seven for sure, glad I stopped by tonight and read this one, and thanks for stopping by my site and reading my poem also, cheri

Funom Makama
Date: 3/11/2016 10:44:00 AM

Thank you so much Cherl Dunn

Tom Quigley

Date: 3/7/2016 6:28:00 AM

Great poem, in an eviscerating, wanna punch somebody's lights out kind of way.

Funom Makama
Date: 3/11/2016 10:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Quigley

Donna Jones

Date: 3/6/2016 9:14:00 PM

This beautiful writing made me read more than once! Such power in these words.a heart with bad memories becomes vocal..wow...it's all mesmerising... Love it. 7

Funom Makama
Date: 3/11/2016 10:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Jones

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/6/2016 2:27:00 AM

I really enjoy your work, Funom. You write on such intriguing topics. Those last few lines especially are thought provoking. "a heart with bad memories becomes vocal" That line stood out to me and it rings so true. Excellent poem! Always, Laura

Funom Makama
Date: 3/11/2016 10:42:00 AM

Thank you so much Laura

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/6/2016 2:04:00 AM

Stabbing such innocence ... there is always scars, and painful memories, that remain. A very dark poem, Funom ... but the truth isn't always pretty and needs to be said. A perversion of this kind does nothing but infect the mind ... all that's left is pieces to put back together. Good on you, for tackling it.

Funom Makama
Date: 3/11/2016 10:42:00 AM

Thank you so much Hicks

Anthony Beesley

Date: 3/5/2016 8:53:00 PM

Like it...it sounds like sheet soaking sweating bullets bad nightmare

Funom Makama
Date: 3/11/2016 10:41:00 AM

Thank you so much Anthony

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/5/2016 8:05:00 PM

Funom....Our gov't (usa) just secretly upgraded Malaysia's human trafficking rating...allowing them to be included in TPP Agreement...the upcoming world gov't ....the American people have no clue to whats coming....great poem, jimbo

Funom Makama
Date: 3/11/2016 10:41:00 AM

hmmm! I totally agree with you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2016 7:38:00 PM

Funom, the title says it all. I liked the line when the lamb becomes a beast.

Funom Makama
Date: 3/11/2016 10:40:00 AM

Thank you so much Andrea

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/5/2016 4:47:00 PM

Powerful poem, these need to be hi-lited.. awesome Funom

Funom Makama
Date: 3/11/2016 10:39:00 AM

Thank you so much harry

Constance La France

Date: 3/5/2016 3:55:00 PM

Funom, this is powerful, deep and dark on a subject very important, wonderfully penned and I must love this 7 ~

Funom Makama
Date: 3/11/2016 10:38:00 AM

Thank you so much Broken Wings

Brian Mcclain

Date: 3/5/2016 2:34:00 PM

Hi Funom, Wow, powerful sentiments and imagery: "the lamb becomes a beast when you least expect" -- that's a great line, raw and insightful. Very skillfully written! Cheers, Brian

Funom Makama
Date: 3/11/2016 10:35:00 AM

Thank you so much Brian

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2016 12:47:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..When someone is forced to do something at a young age it has lasting effects..A person can work through it and become a better person or they can become a bitter person..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Funom Makama
Date: 3/11/2016 10:34:00 AM

Thank you so much Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2016 12:44:00 PM

- Funom, a very deep and great sonnet ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama
Date: 3/11/2016 10:32:00 AM

Thank you so much Andresen

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/5/2016 11:40:00 AM

Morals vs the heart. Temptation is an evil which has no boundaries. Love the sonnet, Funom. Peace my friend:)

Funom Makama
Date: 3/11/2016 10:31:00 AM

Thank you so much Turner

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/5/2016 11:21:00 AM

Reformative poem simply. "A criminal act even with a permit"... thinking its reciprocal" among all other lines are essence, i feel here. Very deep true insight related with practical life beautifully. Loved always,bl

Funom Makama
Date: 3/11/2016 10:31:00 AM

Thank you so much Devnath