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Spring's Other Side

Spring is the time to venture out and play the pretty flowers are wearing the bees maybe it is bright and sunny all day early morning may come with a cool breeze. Did you remember to put on bug spray or you will be lunch and eaten alive make sure that you do not become their prey watch out for the low large hanging beehive. Springtime can bring sun and much needed rain we sneeze and blow our nose as flowers grow today their beautiful colors will reign as the soft wind will magically blow. I cannot wait for this warm special time and hear the ringing sound from the wind chime. Date Written:2/2/2023 4 Place

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Valsa George

Date: 3/3/2023 8:57:00 AM

Spring can be troublesome with stinging bees and other insects. It also causes allergy to many due to pollen from the flowers. A well written poem. Congratulations on your win dear Paula !

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/3/2023 6:35:00 AM

Congratulations for this great win Paula :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/3/2023 6:24:00 AM

Back with big Congratulations on your contest win, with this lovely poem, Paula.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/3/2023 3:09:00 AM

"Springtime can bring sun and much needed rain we sneeze and blow our nose as flowers grow" - beautifully written on the other aspect of the season. Congratulations!

Bill Baker

Date: 2/7/2023 4:17:00 PM

Nice uplifting sonnet, Paula. I enjoy your poem and the hope that spring is coming. :-) Happy days my friend, Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/18/2023 11:05:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed my Spring write. Spring will be here really soon. Hooray!!! Have a blessed day writing away...............

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/3/2023 6:19:00 AM

Well-expressed in this engrossing poem, Paula. Good luck with the contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/3/2023 6:35:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed this write. Spring will be here very soon. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Stephan McBride

Date: 2/2/2023 10:08:00 AM

Love it, you bring us so much joy, love and peace in your writing: )

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/2/2023 10:32:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you love this Springtime write. Spring is filled with a new time of birth/joy/love/peace. It will be here very soon. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/2/2023 9:37:00 AM

This is no 2 on the 100 best list, and even though nobody commented, You are a humble poet not looking for notoriety …. You are so special, my friend! God loves you! Irene..she smiled! Team Poetry, more knowlegable than all of us.:)) Panagiota x.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/2/2023 10:29:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your very kind words. Glad you like my Spring write. I do not read the numbers/page you are talking about. Thank You, for sending. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/2/2023 9:41:00 AM

It is number 7, not#..my error.