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Plants scattered round our yard Each in their state of spring The forsythia's green Reveals nature's mid-spring Still not safe to plant beans Plants scattered round our yard Canon lilies' green leaves Now seven inches high A long way from blossoms When it reaches my thigh Plants scattered round our yard Like green fern-leaf fennel Such a delicate find A licorice scent wafts Cook it, I'd be resigned Plants scattered round our yard Golden iris will bloom Close to Easter this year Disposition sunny Lifts spirits, joy and cheer Theme: Nature Contest: Form M-Monchielle Sponsor: Constance La France Date written: 04/6, 7/ 2022 I checked with grammar checker on poetrysoup. It said lilies' and forsythia's are misspelled but they is not. I checked syllables on SyllableCounter.Net on the internet and it says the line with forsythia in it is only 5 syllables but when I look up the word forsythia it has four syllable and that is the way I pronounce it with four syllables.

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Date: 4/17/2022 3:49:00 PM
Sara, congratulations on your win in my Monchielle contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/18/2022 4:27:00 AM
Thank you, Constance for dropping by with congrats. Sara
Date: 4/17/2022 6:10:00 AM
Wonderful write Sara, Congrats on your win
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/17/2022 1:55:00 PM
Joseph, thank you for dropping by with congrats. Sara
Date: 4/16/2022 11:10:00 PM
Brilliant and creative write on plants scattered in your backyard my dear friend! I love it and enjoyed reading. Congratulations on your win and this superb write! A Blessed Easter! Hugs!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/17/2022 4:19:00 AM
Len, Thanks for dropping by with congrats and for the Easter blessing. I hope that it is the best Easter for you and your family. Sara
Date: 4/16/2022 10:11:00 PM
Congratulations dear friend on your winning poem ! I knew it will be in the list of winners ! Wish you a Happy Easter !
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/17/2022 4:14:00 AM
Valsa, Thanks for the Easter wishes. It has arrived and it seems like it will be a nice day. I hope you and yours have a lovely one. Sara
Date: 4/15/2022 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Spring Plants" write and picture are both lovely. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/15/2022 2:06:00 PM
Thank you, Paula for dropping by with congrats. Sara
Date: 4/15/2022 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/15/2022 2:02:00 PM
Thank you, Terry Miller..I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 4/14/2022 8:45:00 PM
Beautiful writing on "Plants scattered round our yard" - Congratulations!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/15/2022 1:59:00 PM
Alex, Your congrats is encouraging. Thank you. Sara
Date: 4/14/2022 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on a very well-deserved win dear, Sara. Blessings
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/15/2022 1:57:00 PM
Sotto, Thanks for dropping by and letting me know that I placed. Sara
Date: 4/10/2022 6:57:00 PM
Splendid narratives takes one to those blooming fields with magical floral metaphors.. Best wishes
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/11/2022 6:14:00 AM
Your visit and comments are encouraging. Thank you. Sara
Date: 4/9/2022 5:30:00 AM
I am sure you have a beautiful garden and blossoms there inspire many of your writings ! This form of poetry is something totally new to me, but relatively easier ! I enjoyed your poem much ! Best of luck in the contest dear Sara !
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Date: 4/9/2022 7:14:00 AM
Valsa, It is more of different planting around the yard instead of a garden. I haven't been able to take care of a garden for a very long time so it has all gone downhill. Also my husband used to help a little and he can only take care of the vegetable garden now and it is not much. Thanks for the visit. Your comments inspire. Sara
Date: 4/7/2022 11:33:00 PM
Isn't this a GREAT form ? i had not even heard of it before Dear heart's contest. I forgot to tell you on soupmail, yes, I am still working, but only 15 hours a week instead of 20 like before, since I got on SS finally. I love having mondays off. My weekends go Friday through Monday and that is how life should be, less work and more play!!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/8/2022 6:51:00 AM
Andrea, Yes, we should play some everyday. I haven't worked a fulltime job mostly part-time or temporary because of home and family. I don't remember a day when I did only what I wanted to do. I have to consider others in the family. I do watch some TV, come on soup, write a few emails that is my personal time. I am no longer able to do much. I appreciate the visit. Someone on another poetry site came up with this form. I am on that site and visited his work. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Date: 4/7/2022 10:41:00 AM
You are a very talented lady, I love the fact that you can dos o many versatile form, great write Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/7/2022 2:37:00 PM
Thank you, Mystic. I try but I fall short of doing them very well but maybe if I keep on trying someday, I will do the best. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
Date: 4/7/2022 5:13:00 AM
I hear the anticipation of spring blooms in the voice of your poem--much joy to watch them grow and bloom. I see them in your photo. Lovely poem, Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/7/2022 5:29:00 AM
Vijay, The daffodils have come and gone, but the anticipation of future blossoms lingers on. Your visit is uplifting. Sara

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