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** This is a complete reworking of an old short-form idea I had long ago. **

Oh ... Spring-tide ... Always things that juxtapose, Life never flows as smoothly as a gentle rill 'round a stone. Brief notes of harmony, torn asunder by a cacophony of chaos, Turmoil the norm ... reality the chill that bites the skin ... Brackets of the sated curiosity, and the known of all unknown, Turn like the shutter of an eyelid, weighted by contemplation to the inner sway ... The depths of a soul, stripped of intention or care ... Spirit oscillating in the course of thoughts random, churning, Bustling to introspection by memories on the breeze ... Yet ... Spring-tide, I know you're here ... I see branches bend and dance, caressed by the hand of the wind, Like tender fingers through a loved one's locks, golden ... Soft tendrils of invisible energy tickle the blossoms like sprites, And they giggle in soft response, so I know, you're here ... I see the sun Demi-détourné on the wave tops, Like a million gold coins, spilling, and I know you're here ... I hear the belly laugh of a baby drenching the day in innocence, And giving my worries their due and just dismissal, And I know you're here ... A sweet serenade of "peepers" cloaks the twilight in softened dreams, The music of wistful longings hushed by an evening mist, An essence of brokenhearted sunsets, burning in the heavens, And splashed with trembling starlight ... Yes, I know you're here ... Souvenirs of love pressed into the pages of life, Such as the petals from a first-date rose, long since wilted, (Along with the memory of the love they expressed), By the gently torn and frayed offenses of affection, lost ... Melancholy, but sweet ... oh, I know you're here ... Swirls of wonder and promise buoy my spirit, anew ... Glorious aromas and impulses flood my senses with expectancy, And like the flawless and vestal dreams of a child, My hopes are born sun-ward on diaphanous wings, sure ... And I know, you're here ... Yes, Spring-tide ... Always things that juxtapose, But your presence in each day's circumstance Gives reality its touch of magic ... Like dew on the first daffodil, the joyous press of your prospect Alights on each consequence and consideration ... Your leaving was but ephemeral ... Still, my guileless heart knew even then, In the wistful and keen, umber ache of Autumn, That you'd be here with me ... Yes, I know ... oh, I know to my depths ... That you're here. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Your Best Free Verse 2018" Poetry Contest", John Hamilton, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "July Standard Contest" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 3/3/2018 1:13:00 PM
Wonderful and moving. Congrats on your win, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 7:56:00 PM
Many thanks to you, Line - blessings! :-) <3
Date: 2/28/2018 12:27:00 PM
Very 'soulful' and very beautiful-- I especially loved the last stanza. Congratulations, Gregory--well deserved!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 7:56:00 PM
That's very thoughtful, LJ, thank you so much - so glad you liked it, my friend! :-)
Date: 2/28/2018 10:32:00 AM
Stunning ink my friend! Congratulations on a fitting fiest place win. xomo <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 7:55:00 PM
Thank you, Sweet Mo - blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/27/2018 6:49:00 PM
Such soulful beauty graces every poetic line of your magnificent poem Gregory.. Your title is elegant and evocative and your refrain of 'I know you're here' - is hauntingly bittersweet and superb.. A completely exquisite write. Congratulations on your first place win! ~Susan
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 7:54:00 PM
Such an exquisite comment, Susan, and I so appreciate you taking the time to read and post such beautiful words! I am so thankful for you, my friend! Blessings! :-)
Date: 2/27/2018 4:12:00 PM
Back once more, Gregory, to congratulate you on another First Place win for this beautifully written poem. I so loved reading it again! Sandra :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 7:53:00 PM
Many kind thank you's, Sandra, you are so kind to me ... I'm glad you enjoyed it! Blessings, Dear Friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/27/2018 4:06:00 PM
Emotions run high during spring tides Greg. Your magnificent poem expresses that so well. Congratulations on a well deserved First placement! : )
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 7:52:00 PM
That's very kind and considerate of you, Connie - blessings and thanks to you, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Date: 2/27/2018 9:25:00 AM
This is amazing imagery Greg, congrats on another number 1 win!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/1/2018 1:12:00 PM
Thank you SO kindly, John, I am humbled and honored that you found this worthy of such placement, as it is very special to me. This has a lot of personal meaning at many levels, and is a summation of many parts of my life, actually. Blessings and kind thank yous, Friend! :-)
Date: 2/12/2018 2:54:00 PM
Congrats on your first place finish, Gregory. Awesome imagery.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/12/2018 10:45:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line, I'm pleased you enjoyed this one, Friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/8/2018 3:10:00 AM
Congrats, Greg, this is lovely. A worthy topster. Regards, Viv
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 8:55:00 PM
Very kind of you to say, Viv, and I so appreciate your comments! Blessings! :-)
Date: 2/7/2018 2:08:00 PM
Well-done, Greg, great correlation of four of the prompts given for this contest. Congratulations and
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 8:54:00 PM
Thank you very much, my friend, that's very kind of you to say ... blessings! :-)
Date: 2/7/2018 9:11:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully written poem. Congratulations for your top win :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 8:53:00 PM
Many kind thanks, Heidi, I appreciate it so much! :-) <3
Date: 2/7/2018 3:09:00 AM
You took this contest to another level Greg! This is really impressive! Congratulations on your wonderful First place win! : )
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 8:53:00 PM
Oh, thank you so very much, Connie, I greatly appreciate it, Friend! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 2/6/2018 4:30:00 PM
Your poem is beyond beautiful, Gregory. Congratulations your well-deserved 1st Place win! Sandra :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 8:52:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Sandra, I so greatly appreciate your sweet comments, as always! Blessings, Friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/6/2018 6:52:00 AM
Very powerful, congratulations on 1st place Gregory. Your sole exposed, its splendour transcribed, each word a part of you, write on my fellow poet! Write on! Mick
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 8:51:00 PM
That's so very kind of you, Mick, and I so greatly appreciate it, my friend ... blessings! :-)
Date: 1/26/2018 8:19:00 AM
Has this made Poem of the Day yet? It should, it is the poem of my day and beyond. You captured my own brain and emotions, then handed them back to me perfectly laid out and tied in lace poetic trimmings. I love this, would like to lay down in it and savor its feel. Beautiful. All the best ... CayCay
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/27/2018 4:14:00 PM
That's very kind of you, CayCay, I' glad you liked this labor of love ... there is much emotion that I put into this one, and many of my deepest contemplations. I know not as many people read these longer ones, but it's so hard for me to limit length when putting my soul into something. Blessings, my friend - thank you SO much! And no, it has not been Poem of the Day - those are selected at random, so I don't imagine I'll see this one there. :-) <3
Date: 1/24/2018 7:09:00 AM
The beautiful title called my attention to the poem ... a great work ... the last two lines are deep ...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/25/2018 4:46:00 AM
Thank you VERY much, my friend ... I don't seem to be getting comments on this one, so I hope it's that it's too long, not too lousy comments, lol. Blessings Probir!

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