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Spring- An Open Door

Fluffy clouds sail across the sky, and I drink from the deep blue azure where birds fly; I was thirsty, oh so thirsty for spring, for birds that sing . . . And for daffodils and tulips and crocus, oh, sweet the lush lilac drooping; and sunlit puddles and new born kittens. In my garden purple violets are pushing to be free, and yesterday a butterfly came to visit me; the trees have put away their winter scene, and now stand vibrant in shades of green, I am no longer the wilted flower of winter, but have spring-cleaned my weather-stained soul; my hair is a flowing river touched by a breeze, and my view is a sea of blooms sun-kissed. Peaceful is a robin bathing in the rain, and scampering squirrels run insane. Everything is awakening with promise, a sweetness washes away the dregs of winter; and spring is like an open door . . . waiting. __________________________ April 25, 2018 Poetry/Free Verse/Spring- An Open Door Copyright Protected, ID 18- 1016-900-01 All Rights Reserved, 2018, Constance La France Written for the contest, Spring sponsor, Craig Cornish Fourteenth Place

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Date: 4/30/2018 10:44:00 PM
A lovely poem, BW. Vivid imagery of uplifting proportions.
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Date: 4/30/2018 9:11:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Broken Wings!
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Date: 4/29/2018 7:19:00 PM
Amazing poem that makes my heart feel good. Congratulations on your placement win.
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Date: 4/29/2018 5:28:00 PM
This is so upbeat and beautiful with lovely rhymes sown throughout like wild flowers in a garden. A wonderful write BW.
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Date: 4/27/2018 1:26:00 PM
So many great lines jump out at me, I don't know where to start - love the optimistic tone and picturesque phrasing!
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Date: 4/27/2018 8:06:00 AM
I love spring, my fav' time of year. I love how you paint with words over the winter's dormant scene, spring's entry of life and beauty, BW. The best of luck in the contest and all the best to you. :) ~ Artsie
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Date: 4/26/2018 8:47:00 AM
I found this to be such a beautiful expression, it made me feel happy. xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 4/26/2018 11:11:00 AM
Mike thank you for the visit and the beautiful

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