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Spooks

. OO ( ) { } ( o ) ( ) / \ / \ / \ / \ { } / \ B@@ to U Fright this night Candy and belly aches Tricks from your treats!! ll ( < > ) ( o )

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Matthew Anish

Date: 10/7/2010 3:07:00 PM

Halloween! Cute poem and picture! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Larry Belt

Date: 10/7/2010 9:57:00 AM

LOL Too Funny....I like the first one.....Larry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/7/2010 8:51:00 AM

Doris u are becoming the master creator of these kinds of designs and words together.. enjoyed with luv.. and luv that last line for sure..my friend.. hope everyone is well...

Constance La France

Date: 10/7/2010 6:41:00 AM

cute, yes, too much of that candy can play a trick~~

Diane Locksley

Date: 10/6/2010 6:52:00 PM

Really cute and funny, Doris! Happy Halloween. Diane

Jayne Eggins

Date: 10/6/2010 5:56:00 AM

LOL I love concrete poetry and this ones delightful Doris smile thanks for the comment on my poem its appreciated, the blue fluff was from an old scarf of my grandmothers I still own love Jayne

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/6/2010 3:47:00 AM

Cute...I like this one...Got high on candy...A sugar high then reaped the rewards, huh?...I enjoyed this one..These things are not easy to do...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/5/2010 10:33:00 PM

yes liked the contradiction of a short end as opposed to the longer intro.

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/5/2010 9:38:00 PM

Doris, you asked what "Snow!!!" was about, well, this is about some thoughts that was cascading down on me in swift succession, sending me into a turmoil of mental anguish. I got up and wrote this poem and the topic snow came to mind as I relate the fall of snow to my swirling thoughts. Nice display! Joy (Jew)