Soup Creek Sneak

Disaster fell upon Soup Creek
When everyone heard Jenna shriek,
"Tom's Marmite was taken!
He'll have to eat bacon
Unless we all play Hide 'n Seek!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kaufman Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 1:58 PM
belated congrats for you're potd Rico. It's nice to see that you are still at it and so gifted at limericks. Nancy
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 10:12 AM
ello Rico Leffanta, Make the plate of bacon a big plat full. So Tom and I can share. Aloha! Darlene
La France Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 8:50 AM
Rico, cute limerick and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY, God Bless ~
Tor Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 5:42 AM
Congratulations Rico on your POTD. I am sure Jenna and Mayor Tom would appreciate you receiving this Honor...
Sangster - K Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 8:24 PM
Congratulations Rico on POTD! A fun limerick indeed :-D
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 3:46 PM
Very good Rico. Congratulations on having this fun Limerick honored with POTD! Blessings xxoo
Edmonds  Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 12:41 PM
Great Limerick Rico, congratulations on poem of the day……. Belle
Awtry Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 11:48 AM
Nice one Rico! Congrats on POTD:) ps
Faulkner Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 10:31 AM
Another case for Sheriff Rico! Well done and congrats on potd!
May Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 9:44 AM
Another Soup Creek story in the making, Congrats on POTD Rico
Flood Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 9:13 AM
Congrats on POTD, Rico. The Soup Creek saga sure hasn’t run out of steam as yet. Terry
Roper Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 8:31 AM
Hahaha! Congratulations on POTD.
Baker Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 8:08 AM
Enjoyable spin-off of Soup Creek, Rico. Congratulations on your POTD honor! Will there be more? I hope so. :-) Bill
Hankins Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 7:59 AM
Congratulations on P.O.T.D., Rico.
Lawrence Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 7:06 AM
Big hugs my friend! Congratulations on POTD! The saga continues! Susan :)
Leffanta Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 11:38 AM
The POTD should have been awarded to your, "Effervescence" as no one reads a limerick twice, whereas your poem has been re-read several times by many people! Aloha 'oe!
Fowler Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 5:41 AM
Cute one Rico. Congratulations on POTD! Linda
Logan Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 5:16 AM
Keep the bacon coming, Rico. That other stuff has yet to be found. Congrats on POTD.
Calasibetta Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 4:16 AM
Rico, Congratulations on your ‘fun’ POTD! Tom’s marmite has certainly been an on going topic to amuse us all. :)Paulette
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 3:52 AM
Rico, a funny one, congratulations on POTD!
George Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 1:47 AM
Congratulations Rico on your POTD
M  Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 1:05 AM
Congratulations Rico well deserved POTD….Debx
Cunningham Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 12:36 AM
Because its POTD Rico I'm upping the reward to $20,000. congratulations to you. Tom
Cunningham Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 5:16 AM
Sheriff Koplin has wired the Pinkertons who are sending some men to assist him.
Logan Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 5:15 AM
I think I'm in trouble...
Cunningham Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 5:13 AM
Had a telegram from Sheriff Koplin who's pulling out all the stops to find the culprit.
M  Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 1:05 AM
I assuming I’m number one suspect Tom with our Mite Wars…..and I work it Jenna’s bar. I’ve been set up……by who???
George Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 6:58 PM
Don't make him eat bacon when he is so keenly bent on having marmite.... ! Great rhyming and pleasantly funny
Parker Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 1:08 PM
Dastardly termites afoot again!!!
M  Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 6:24 PM
Good one Rico…..Funny! …..Debx
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