Secrets of Passion

The sheets beneath the shadow lights a spark, for whence we laid down he nestled his head. Our enchantment lights magic in the dark, but so much is spoken with words unsaid. For love can be given without a sound, and received within the silence of night. Freely nurturing with touching, profound, nevertheless understood without sight. Let us keep the secrets of passion calm, yet exalt beyond the whisper of breeze. Free from apprehension and busy qualm, longing for our souls to be hushed with ease. For as long as we remain free from sound, our mystical romance will be unbound. ~28 April 2016~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 5/24/2017 7:27:00 PM
this is a beautiful sonnet, Laura Loo. Congrats on your well deserved win. SEVEN
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Date: 5/13/2017 6:12:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 5/12/2017 9:46:00 AM
Congrats on your win Laura. Your words do indeed ignite memories of quiet realities so often experienced in relationships.
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Date: 5/11/2017 2:59:00 PM
Laura, nice to read-- thanks for entering my contest. Congratulations :) SKAT
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Date: 9/20/2016 11:18:00 AM
Lovely, lovely, lovely! Congratulations, Laura! ...Fran
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Date: 9/20/2016 9:32:00 AM
Laura, a B I G congratulations on your wonderful win with this BEAUTIFUL poem ~
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Date: 9/20/2016 10:12:00 AM
thank you lovely Broken Wings :)-luloo
Date: 9/20/2016 7:36:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful romantic poem, luloo. Agnes
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Date: 9/20/2016 10:12:00 AM
thank you sweet Agnes :)-luloo
Date: 6/17/2016 3:55:00 PM
Stopping back with my congratulations...like CayCAy I believe it should have placed higher.
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Date: 9/20/2016 10:11:00 AM
thank you Tim :)-luloo
Date: 6/15/2016 12:33:00 AM
A lovely piece with true romance
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Date: 9/20/2016 10:11:00 AM
thank you Weston :)-luloo
Date: 6/4/2016 6:59:00 PM
This speaks to me on a personal level and it speaks ever so poetically! I think this is one of my Lulu favorites and, in my opinion, should have placed much higher in the contest. To me, your poem, describes the joy, bliss and contentment in snuggling with the one you love all the night long. 7 ... CayCay FAV
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Date: 9/20/2016 10:11:00 AM
thank you very much CayCay you are sweet :)-luloo
Date: 6/1/2016 4:33:00 PM
Magical romance in boom with in the silence of night. Beautifully done my lovely friend. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 9/20/2016 10:10:00 AM
thank you BL :)-luloo
Date: 6/1/2016 6:32:00 AM
A great work all throughou Laura! Congratulations! :) _Hans
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Date: 9/20/2016 10:10:00 AM
thank you Hans :)-luloo
Date: 5/31/2016 9:48:00 AM
A 7 for sure, Laura Loo. Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 5/31/2016 4:51:00 PM
thank you Janice :)-luloo
Date: 5/30/2016 8:09:00 PM
A lovely sonnet and love poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/31/2016 7:01:00 AM
than you sweet lady!! :)-luloo
Date: 5/30/2016 6:31:00 PM
Beautiful... romantic... quietly erotic. Love the line, "but so much is spoken with words unsaid". Congrats!
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Date: 5/31/2016 7:00:00 AM
thank you John :)-luloo
Date: 5/30/2016 6:19:00 PM
Nice work here! CONRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN!
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Date: 5/30/2016 6:23:00 PM
thank you Edlynn :)-luloo
Date: 5/30/2016 4:41:00 PM
Lovely.....Congratulations
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Date: 5/30/2016 5:59:00 PM
thank you for my placement Janice :)-luloo
Date: 5/30/2016 4:04:00 PM
Silence can be golden, Luloo. Nicely written and congratulations on your lovely, romantic Sonnet's placement in the Sonnet contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/30/2016 5:57:00 PM
thank you Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 5/30/2016 7:17:00 AM
Beautiful poem , Laura. ...Fran
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Date: 5/30/2016 12:05:00 PM
thank you Fran :)-luloo
Date: 5/29/2016 10:16:00 AM
Beautiful!!
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Date: 5/30/2016 12:05:00 PM
thank you Richard :)-luloo
Date: 5/28/2016 6:10:00 PM
Such a lovely sonnet Laura...a fave
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Date: 5/30/2016 12:04:00 PM
thank you very much Tim :)-luloo
Date: 5/28/2016 5:50:00 PM
Absolutely gonna fav this beautiful write that stirred, echoed and captured my own memories and emotions. Lovely. Well-done, your talent shines ... CayCay (oh, and the 7 thing) (oh, and good luck, but you don't need it)
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Date: 5/30/2016 12:04:00 PM
thank you sweet CayCay! hope all is well with you lady!!:)-luloo
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