Secrets of Passion

The sheets beneath the shadow lights a spark, for whence we laid down he nestled his head. Our enchantment lights magic in the dark, but so much is spoken with words unsaid. For love can be given without a sound, and received within the silence of night. Freely nurturing with touching, profound, nevertheless understood without sight. Let us keep the secrets of passion calm, yet exalt beyond the whisper of breeze. Free from apprehension and busy qualm, longing for our souls to be hushed with ease. For as long as we remain free from sound, our mystical romance will be unbound. ~28 April 2016~
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Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 7:27 PM
this is a beautiful sonnet, Laura Loo. Congrats on your well deserved win. SEVEN
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 6:12 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
Johnson Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 9:46 AM
Congrats on your win Laura. Your words do indeed ignite memories of quiet realities so often experienced in relationships.
A  Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 2:59 PM
Laura, nice to read-- thanks for entering my contest. Congratulations :) SKAT
Grasso Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 11:18 AM
Lovely, lovely, lovely! Congratulations, Laura! ...Fran
La France Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 9:32 AM
Laura, a B I G congratulations on your wonderful win with this BEAUTIFUL poem ~
Scars Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 10:12 AM
thank you lovely Broken Wings :)-luloo
Krampe Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 7:36 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful romantic poem, luloo. Agnes
Scars Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 10:12 AM
thank you sweet Agnes :)-luloo
Smith Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 3:55 PM
Stopping back with my congratulations...like CayCAy I believe it should have placed higher.
Scars Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 10:11 AM
thank you Tim :)-luloo
Gregory Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 12:33 AM
A lovely piece with true romance
Scars Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 10:11 AM
thank you Weston :)-luloo
Godwin Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 6:59 PM
This speaks to me on a personal level and it speaks ever so poetically! I think this is one of my Lulu favorites and, in my opinion, should have placed much higher in the contest. To me, your poem, describes the joy, bliss and contentment in snuggling with the one you love all the night long. 7 ... CayCay FAV
Scars Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 10:11 AM
thank you very much CayCay you are sweet :)-luloo
Devnath  Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 4:33 PM
Magical romance in boom with in the silence of night. Beautifully done my lovely friend. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
Scars Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 10:10 AM
thank you BL :)-luloo
Selfa Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 6:32 AM
A great work all throughou Laura! Congratulations! :) _Hans
Scars Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 10:10 AM
thank you Hans :)-luloo
Canerdy Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 9:48 AM
A 7 for sure, Laura Loo. Congrats on your win. Janice
Scars Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 4:51 PM
thank you Janice :)-luloo
Johnson Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 8:09 PM
A lovely sonnet and love poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Scars Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 7:01 AM
than you sweet lady!! :)-luloo
Watt Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 6:31 PM
Beautiful... romantic... quietly erotic. Love the line, "but so much is spoken with words unsaid". Congrats!
Scars Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 7:00 AM
thank you John :)-luloo
Nau Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 6:19 PM
Nice work here! CONRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN!
Scars Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 6:23 PM
thank you Edlynn :)-luloo
Medders Tobechi Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 4:41 PM
Lovely.....Congratulations
Scars Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 5:59 PM
thank you for my placement Janice :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 4:04 PM
Silence can be golden, Luloo. Nicely written and congratulations on your lovely, romantic Sonnet's placement in the Sonnet contest. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 5:57 PM
thank you Sandra :)-luloo
Grasso Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 7:17 AM
Beautiful poem , Laura. ...Fran
Scars Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 12:05 PM
thank you Fran :)-luloo
Lamoureux Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 10:16 AM
Beautiful!!
Scars Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 12:05 PM
thank you Richard :)-luloo
Smith Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 6:10 PM
Such a lovely sonnet Laura...a fave
Scars Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 12:04 PM
thank you very much Tim :)-luloo
Godwin Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 5:50 PM
Absolutely gonna fav this beautiful write that stirred, echoed and captured my own memories and emotions. Lovely. Well-done, your talent shines ... CayCay (oh, and the 7 thing) (oh, and good luck, but you don't need it)
Scars Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 12:04 PM
thank you sweet CayCay! hope all is well with you lady!!:)-luloo
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