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Sol Squints

Sol squints as His ruby-red eye peaks over the edge of the Earth. And as scarlet inks a pink sky, Day dims, awaiting Dawn's rebirth. Shades of charcoal dappled on blue; merge in the creases of the night. And a lone owl bids Sol adieu; silhouetted by Day's last light. Vermilion clouds float overhead; gathering low above the ground. And as the far horizon bleeds, darkness descends without a sound. Shadows flow like rivers of black as twilight succumbs to Dusk's dark. And daylight slips into a crack; abandoning a landscape; stark.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/8/2018 8:25:00 AM
Over the top beautiful description of a stunning sunset, Emile. Well done.
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Date: 7/16/2015 12:24:00 AM
Writing with an ABAB rhyme scheme is not easy, but you've done it beautifully here, Emile, and the imagery is just breathtaking!... I will join Gary and Viv in faving this one, as well!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/22/2015 4:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Kelly, as always I appreciate all your support. Emile.
Date: 7/15/2015 5:37:00 PM
Emile, a lovely 7, beautifully penned and thanks for visiting my flag poem
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/16/2015 9:46:00 AM
Thanks broken, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/13/2015 11:41:00 PM
A rich tapestry of colour and shade, Emile. Lovely verse. A fav and a #7. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/14/2015 10:42:00 AM
Thanks Viv, I appreciate your friendly words of support. Emile.
Date: 7/12/2015 2:16:00 PM
My friend Gary "Green Leaf" captured the marvelous imagery this poem contains. What I would add is the deep peace that filled my heart reading your poem. It was very satisfying and will be read again many times. well done. 7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/13/2015 9:27:00 AM
Thanks David, as always I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/12/2015 1:41:00 PM
Hello Emile!! This rhyme write is an instant "7 + FAV" in my book!! "Sol Squints" is marvelous verse and rhyme work. The interweaving imagery and the color contrasts only further embellish with each successive verse yielding an exquisite and masterful narrative picture and product in the end. Very Well-Done here Sir!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/13/2015 9:27:00 AM
Thanks so much Gary, as always I appreciate all your support. Emile.

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