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So Late So Soon

Dr. Seuss: “How did it get to be so late so soon?” I sat down to write, but no thoughts would come. Still thinking and thinking, I said, “This is dumb!” One look at the clock, and what did I see? I’d started at one and now it was three! The page of my tablet showed white like the snow. Where, my friends, where did the precious time go? I got myself up and decided to clean, but people kept calling - You know what I mean? My sister, my mother, then old Uncle Fred. I couldn’t believe it. I thought he was dead! I glanced at the clock. It was already five. The only GOOD thing: Uncle Fred is alive! I needed to go to the gym and the store, but I just couldn’t get myself out the door. The gym I postponed. So what else is new? I just had too much of housework to do. Outside was still day light. I thought I’d get done By seven at least when still I’d see sun! But once I got started, I just couldn’t stop. I vacuumed and scrubbed, then danced with a mop! I looked out the window. The sky had grown black. Saner folks now would be hitting the sack! Propped up on a pillow I sat down again, this time on my bed with that old shoulder pain. My poem wrote itself by the light of the moon. So how did it get to be so late so soon? For Brenda Chiri-Carroll's Funny How Fast Time Flies Poetry Contest Note: There is no Uncle Fred!! Just some poetic license!

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Date: 8/29/2015 10:09:00 AM
I enjoyed the quote and winning poem. Congrats Andrea.
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Date: 8/19/2015 9:21:00 PM
I started reading and as I got into the rhythm it was obvious that it was for the Dr. Seuss contest. Excellent, loved it.
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Date: 8/18/2015 8:49:00 AM
This is awesome Andrea, I love the flow of this one as well. You have a way with words :)
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Date: 8/17/2015 10:51:00 PM
Wonderful quote n a superb poem dear Andrea ! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/17/2015 4:04:00 PM
This was fun, the "danced with a mop" line cracked me up because I see myself doing that too...I enjoyed this one a lot Andrea, and hope you put on your Seuss shoes again and write a childrens poem for the next contest.. and it is okay to dance with mops!
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Date: 8/17/2015 3:25:00 PM
Andrea, congrats in "Casarah Nance"s" contest... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 8/17/2015 1:15:00 PM
Good for you my dear... congrats.I love reading these Dr Suess poems. BG
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Date: 8/17/2015 11:02:00 AM
Brilliant! Congrats on the win! A just can't stop... reading these things!
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Date: 8/17/2015 10:26:00 AM
Great Job and Congrats Andrea :)
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Date: 8/17/2015 9:33:00 AM
my sentiment exactly dear poet...there is no such thing as "writer's block" save for the pnuema who sits in one corner without move! And even for such a soul, the colors of the walls, scrapes, pain on the but from sitting...ect....ect...lol thanx fer the inspiration Andrea and read...have a wonderful journey....much love, james
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Date: 8/17/2015 9:15:00 AM
So humorous and yet so true. Love the rhythm this Quatrain had.
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Date: 8/17/2015 8:54:00 AM
gosh what a day lol love the humour here - I am sure many of us can relate to this :-) congrats on your win Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/16/2015 8:40:00 PM
Time passes quickly - we are lucky to have a venue on which we can send out our thoughts. Glad you overcame your writers block! Peace &Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/16/2015 2:03:00 AM
Happy Anniversary dear Andrea. Hope next fortyyears to be at least as happy as the first ones! Beautiful poem!
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Date: 8/15/2015 2:23:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one and thinking about Dr. Seuss' work "The Cat In The Hat"..I have read that one many times I have, I have..Thanks for all the visits ..Your comments are uplifting..Sara
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Date: 8/15/2015 1:34:00 PM
Andrea, this is outstanding for the contest, I like the quote, your writing captured it well A7 and thanks for visiting my poem, beloved
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Date: 8/14/2015 11:28:00 PM
Lovely poem. It is terrible when you are in the mood to write but it just won't come. I must admit that I use this as an excuse not to do the washing, ironing and cleaning but they just sit there sneering and saying I'm still here, I still need doing. Before long the day is gone. Loved the verse Kind regards, Ian
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Date: 8/14/2015 11:13:00 PM
I LOVED the part about Uncle Fred. My fav part! The humor was so adorable, Andrea. :) Good luck in the contest, dear. Hugs
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Date: 8/14/2015 9:41:00 PM
very nice Andrea, it reads just like a Dr. Suess book. Best of luck in the contest
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Date: 8/14/2015 11:11:00 AM
I so know thAt feeling like the poem just writes itself. I chose this quote too. Love this one,
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Date: 8/14/2015 11:10:00 AM
I so know thAt feeling like the poem just writes itself. I chose this quote too. Love this one,
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Date: 8/14/2015 10:21:00 AM
I know how those days go. There gone before they even start.
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