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So In Love

So in love (Love one another) I've learned so much in these last few years... love means sharing the laughter, shedding some tears and, I know it's been hard, but I really believe we can make it Believe in me... like I believe in you... we both have our flaws... but we know what to do to ease all the pain, all we need is to love one another bridge I know.... it's not easy... to trust another with your heart... it's true... we're both fragile... but, it will work, if we both do our part Chorus We're... so in love, and we both want to try, to please each other, without asking why Let's make a new life, all we need...is to love one another We're both so.... so in love... so in love...so in love We're both so....so in love so in love...so in love So believe in me... like I believe in you... tell me your dreams... we can make them come true in this crazy world... all we need, is to love one another believe in me... like I believe in you... tell me your dreams... we can make them come true... in this crazy world, all we need is to love one another Chorus We're... so in love, and we both want to try, to please each other, without asking why Let's make a new life, all we need...is to love one another We're both so.... so in love... so in love...so in love We're both so....so in love so in love...so in love chorus repeat fade to zero John Derek Hamilton August 18, 2017

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/14/2017 8:28:00 PM

A lush and lovely love song John. Genuine and heartfelt lyrics. I was captivated from the first verse to the last. Excellent song and enjoyed!

John Hamilton
Date: 10/14/2017 9:21:00 PM

Thanks a lot Susan, I do value your input as I know you understand good poetry, and are honest with your comments, have a great night!

Lynn Marie

Date: 9/19/2017 9:43:00 PM

A beautiful song John. The word 'believe' is one of my favourite words and your gorgeous lyrics give it it's heart and soul. The title is divine. blessings, lynn xo

John Hamilton
Date: 9/20/2017 6:40:00 PM

Thanks Lynn Marie I always enjoy your comments, this time no different!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/2/2017 11:29:00 PM

Ah, such a sweet, heartfelt song here, John. Just lovely! Always, Laura

John Hamilton
Date: 9/2/2017 11:33:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by with your encouraging words, appreciate the visit Laura, my sister's name is Laura also!

Silent One

Date: 8/22/2017 7:51:00 AM

Loving your songs John, when will we hear you play?

John Hamilton
Date: 8/22/2017 11:33:00 AM

I have one more coming maybe a week or two, looking for a male vocalist! Thanks for the nice comment!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/20/2017 10:01:00 AM

So so so in love, nice, absolutely great lyrics, what I like best about yours is that it's realistic, not all positive and good alone:)

John Hamilton
Date: 8/20/2017 11:25:00 AM

Thanks Jo I glad you like the lyrics, this one is special to me!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/20/2017 1:23:00 AM

My dream is to write lyrics to a song that will one day be famous. It isn't easy. Your poem makes it look easy, though. Good job. The content is sweet...love is always the focus of life. hugs

John Hamilton
Date: 8/20/2017 11:24:00 AM

It's a great dream like I said to Andrea, only 5 out of 100 published songs actually make it to radio, the majority find their way to tv shows broadway etc, but either way it is satisfying, thanks for the positive feedback!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2017 8:00:00 PM

and oh how I wish I could hear this with a beautiful melody behind it!! Very nice as always,John.

John Hamilton
Date: 8/20/2017 11:22:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I have one song hopefully I can upload it in a few weeks, looking for a male vocalist. Thanks again!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/18/2017 10:17:00 AM

Love songs are the best... terrific John

John Hamilton
Date: 8/18/2017 11:49:00 AM

Thanks Tim

Lin Lane

Date: 8/18/2017 9:53:00 AM

I particularly like the bridge, John. And, "believe in me like I believe in you." Mutual trust and respect are so important in a relationship. Great lyrics.

John Hamilton
Date: 8/18/2017 11:48:00 AM

Thanks Lin