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So Hydro-Licious


Hair, hair, hair, oh my long, long hair
ooooh the smooth bliss of it
the creamy swirl of it . . .
 
so hydro-licious . . . . 
oooooooh hair, hair hair, my long, long hair

quenched with moisture . . .
scented with crushed berries, ya ya ya
curly, wispy feathered hair, no merci
silky and shiny, that's my hair . . .

so hydro-licious
oooooooh hair, hair, hair, my long, long hair

ooooh the glossy, velvet feel of it
the richness of it . . . 
falling, like a waterfall, ya ya ya
sweet and sassy with kissing curls, no, no,  no 

so hydro-licious
oooooooh hair, hair, hair, my long, long hair


so hydro-licious
oooooooh hair, hair, hair, my long, long hair


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May 26, 2015


Poetry/Lyric/So Hydro-Licious
Copyright Protected, ID 05-677-102-26
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

Product Inspiration - Herbal Essence Shampoo


Written for the Standardcontest, Sing Me... A Jingle,
sponsor, Lyric Man, Judged 2015

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/19/2015 2:44:00 PM
Broken, that's a cool JINGLE! CONGRATS!!!!! SKAT
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Date: 7/19/2015 12:35:00 AM
Makes me want to go and buy some, and I will when I get some more hair. Great write, BW, congratulations, Viv x
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Date: 7/18/2015 10:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wing, I love the jingle. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/18/2015 2:31:00 PM
Nice Jingle I see how it made it on top...congrats
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Date: 7/18/2015 2:11:00 PM
BW, this is a great jingle. It has a nice flow also. Congratulations on a well deserved win:-)Alexis
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Date: 7/18/2015 1:33:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/18/2015 12:57:00 PM
WELL, not since the musical HAIR have I encountered such a tribute to the fallacy fanatic. This is really well done, complete with all the oooh's and aaaah's of the coiffed culture.
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Date: 5/27/2015 8:47:00 AM
This is fun Constance, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/27/2015 7:48:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Great ad for the product..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 5/26/2015 4:04:00 PM
fun write - good luck for the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/26/2015 1:53:00 PM
:) This is sweet, Broken Wings. :) I liked it. I love it when hair is all the things you say. I admit....I'm hair crazy! For my it's coconut scented shampoos and conditioners. :) YA YA YA! :) Cute poem!
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Date: 5/26/2015 11:03:00 AM
So wonderful, I am inspired to try this out...7
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Date: 5/26/2015 6:52:00 AM
Great R 'n B jingle, BW. Rinse and repeat. Good luck, Viv x
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Date: 5/26/2015 6:23:00 AM
Yep, and I bet that's what you use on your beautiful, black and 'long, long hair'...I know I've said this before, but I LOVE seeing your funny and playful side. More please...
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Date: 5/26/2015 12:01:00 AM
Fun poem to read! Enjoyed it! :)
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