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Snake's Surprising Predicament

For Joseph May's Out On A Lim Poetry Contest 8 June 2025 A rattlesnake, quite full of dread, Found a small mouse under its bed. "O, dear!" it did hiss, "What a tempting bliss, But I'm far too full to be fed!" 2nd Place

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Date: 6/15/2025 10:13:00 AM
Love this. And congrats on the win.
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Date: 6/15/2025 7:05:00 AM
Cuteness...lucky mouse! Congratulations Bernard! :)
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/15/2025 4:57:00 PM
Thanks, dear Ma'am Linda. My first title was Lucky Mouse but I replaced it with Snake's ....
Date: 6/14/2025 7:51:00 AM
So cute and funny! I love Limericks... it takes humor and talent! Congratulations! Xo
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/15/2025 4:58:00 PM
Thank you, dear Ma'am Crystol. So glad that you like this hilarious piece.
Date: 6/14/2025 7:34:00 AM
Very nicely penned Bernard, Congrats on your win
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/15/2025 5:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sir Joseph. This win is one of the gems I will treasure forever.

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