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Yes, I did climb a fever tree. The only limit is one's fantasy. I'll attempt to go higher. Something was blocking my view. Then I realized. There was a dense fog within me. Written: June 27, 2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/3/2022 10:11:00 AM

And ego is it's source. Another insightful poem. Very thought-provoking. I like it. Bill

Valsa George

Date: 6/27/2022 10:31:00 PM

It is because of the inner fog restricting our view, that we can't ascend greater heights. This realization is the first step in correcting ourselves ! Lofty thoughts, dear Lasaad !

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/27/2022 8:59:00 AM

Fabulous write my friend. Your poems lately have found the voice you wish to convey.