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I’m kept hidden in the cupboard, always under lock and key; dare not come into the open how disgraceful it would be! I sit cramped, my bones are aching, a dark secret in the dark; I can’t even take a breather for a scandal it could spark. I’m condemned to live forever out of sight from prying eyes while my master’s troubled conscience covers up for endless lies. How I wish for change of fortune so the truth will all come out. It would give me back my freedom then with joy I’ll jump and shout! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Contest: Whitsun Premier Sponsor: Brian Strand Placed: 5th © 22nd May 2017

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/19/2017 8:12:00 PM

Oh Paul, your clever and lovely humor, and your personification of the skeleton, has me smiling again.. I seem to smile a lot while reading your poetry :) Hidden secrets tend to be the bane of the holder's existence.. and skeletons have a funny habit of coming out of the cupboard when you least expect it - and dancing for the joy of it! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 12/20/2017 11:21:00 AM

Once again, thank you for your awesome feedback, Susan! Pity you missed out on the dancing neon skeleton; it will be back soon, once I renew my premium membership. ~ Warm regards // paul

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/25/2017 4:57:00 PM

Your humour is delightful Paul. I also read the deeper meaning of the effort it takes to 'hide' and wonder why we expend so much energy to conceal. I see a 'skeleton' as a non entity, it only comes to life when we give it power, whereas a skeleton with flesh still has the ability to feel, thus 'choice' is still a hopeful option. ...but that's just me...you made me think and smIle... thank you:)) A uniquely clever poem Paul a cute picture too.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/27/2017 8:53:00 AM

I had no doubt that you'd appreciate the humour and deeper meaning, Lynn; you have an innate ability to read and give meaningful insightful feedback...thank you:) Warm regards // paul

James Inman

Date: 6/14/2017 8:56:00 AM

Well done Paul, clever and humorous, made me smile.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/15/2017 8:52:00 AM

I'm pleased you found it to your liking, James:)...thank you! Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/30/2017 12:37:00 PM

- A wonderful poem, Paul .... love the humor :))) - A small greeting and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 5/30/2017 2:16:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise; your complimentary comments are a pleasure to read:) Hugs // paul

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 5/28/2017 5:42:00 PM

Love the twist motivated by the dancing skeleton. I guess you kind of have two poems here. Great writing as always. Congratulations on your win.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/29/2017 3:56:00 PM

Thank you for a second visit in as many days, Armand. Glad you found it to your liking. Regards // paul

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/27/2017 5:46:00 AM

Good Morning Paul. Perhaps we all have something hidden. Your entry is fine poetry and expression. I very much enjoyed your ending stanza/quatrain for your words say so much which makes the reader pause. Honestly. Well done in its entirety. Enjoy the morning and day.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/27/2017 5:13:00 PM

Thank you for a lovely visit, Lisa; your generous feedback is truly appreciated. I hope you've had a pleasant weekend:) Regards // paul

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 5/26/2017 8:18:00 PM

Ah, that's the rattling noise I've been hearing all this time, lol. A nice, witty poem, Paul. Good insight poking fun at our unpleasant past deeds. Honest fun poetry. Love always.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/27/2017 4:54:00 PM

Thank you, Freddie; at times it's good to poke fun at other...and ourselves:) 'Honest fun poetry' sums it up well! Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 5/25/2017 4:21:00 PM

I read someplace a poem it said'" , Grandma says their skeletons in our closets , but i've looked and just cannot find them." this reminded me of that.. Good write, Paul. ~*

Paul Callus
Date: 5/26/2017 3:37:00 PM

Thank you for the 'like', Eve, and I like that quote, too:) Regards // paul

Joseph May

Date: 5/25/2017 8:12:00 AM

Dropping back with my Congrats

Paul Callus
Date: 5/25/2017 11:46:00 AM

Thanks Joseph. Congrats are also due to you and your high placement. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2017 7:00:00 PM

I like the personification here. Or I could say skeleteonization. heehee. Do they say skeletons in the cupboard in your part of the world? Mine are in the closet! In MY cupboards lotsa great food! Anyway, I love your poem ,Paul. SEVEN

Paul Callus
Date: 5/25/2017 11:54:00 AM

Thank you for this pleasant visit, Andrea. I use both cupboard and closet, though I have a feeling that the English usually go for cupboard. I also have lots of food in my cupboard, and hungry mouths that go off with it:) ~ Regards // paul

Joseph May

Date: 5/24/2017 3:44:00 PM

With moves like that it seems his freedom is not far off... :-)..Nicely penned Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 5/24/2017 4:50:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph:) In fact he is dancing for joy because he found freedom in the last stanza:) Regards // paul

Maria Williams

Date: 5/24/2017 6:16:00 AM

Skeletons have a habit of sneaking out . A very good write Paul and I love the dancing neon skeletons. A7+ Maria

Paul Callus
Date: 5/24/2017 12:28:00 PM

Yes, some skeletons make their way out, especially if a person is in politics...opponents go on the attack by searching out dark secrets!! Thank you for stopping by, Maria:) Regards // paul

John Michaels

Date: 5/23/2017 5:24:00 PM

Clever write, Paul! Interesting how the last stanza totally changes the tone of the whole poem! Well done. Regards, John.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/24/2017 1:03:00 PM

Thank you, John. The last stanza was added after I stumbled upon the 'jolly skeleton'! Regards // paul

Carol B.

Date: 5/23/2017 4:56:00 PM

A clever write with a touch of humour :)

Paul Callus
Date: 5/24/2017 1:00:00 PM

Pleased that you enjoyed it, Carol:) Thank you & regards // paul

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 5/23/2017 2:10:00 PM

Those skeletons eventually find their? way out. Great write and fabulous picture of a joyful skeleton. A seven Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/24/2017 12:39:00 PM

Thank you, Elizabeth. I was looking for a 'serious' skeleton picture and instead this happy one popped out:) ~ Regards // paul

Lin Lane

Date: 5/23/2017 8:35:00 AM

This is a whole 'nother side of you, Paul. I think your pen writes extremely clever from all angles.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/24/2017 12:24:00 PM

Thank you very much, Lin. I suppose mood dictates how and what we write, although we often get carried away by the topic of certain contests and their ability to inspire. ~ Regards // paul

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/23/2017 5:53:00 AM

quirky write, good fun but with an underlying serious message...thank you for your comment on my work

Paul Callus
Date: 5/23/2017 4:42:00 PM

Thank you, Charlotte; pleased that you enjoyed it. Regards // paul

Supraja Kannan

Date: 5/22/2017 9:32:00 PM

This is fabulous... Humorous write with a hidden message... I enjoyed it... I love that pic... He is so cute....ha ha... Beautifully written.... A big 7...

Paul Callus
Date: 5/23/2017 4:38:00 PM

Thank you, Supraja. A bit of humour never hurts anyone...and that skeleton sure is cool:) Regards // paul

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/22/2017 7:23:00 PM

this is just adorable! i love the poem and the dancing skeleton to accompany it is wonderful, too. great job, paul...

Paul Callus
Date: 5/23/2017 4:27:00 PM

Thank you, Ilene. I, too, fell in love with that skeleton! Regards // paul

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 5/22/2017 6:24:00 PM

Precious Poem! Everyone has their secrets - and more than one! It's the better part of discretion. LOL

Paul Callus
Date: 5/23/2017 4:17:00 PM

Thank you, Sunlite! I am sure that most of us have a secret or more, but I would not want to live with a dark secret that eventually becomes too heavy to carry:) Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/22/2017 5:50:00 PM

Paul, I love the humor in this piece. But it is so true that people who have secrets kept buried in a closet bear the burden silently of the weight that comes with keeping a big secret hidden. Indeed freedom comes from not having to carry the burden any longer. : ) 7

Paul Callus
Date: 5/23/2017 4:04:00 PM

Thank you...Your feedback is right on the dot, Connie! Initially I wrote 3 stanzas, but after coming across the skeleton picture I felt obliged to add another stanza to compliment it. Warm regards // paul