Sixty Birthdays

my first one spent in my birthday suit
warmed by a receiving blanket
after my tunnel chute

in my youth, gifts i remember —
small camera, parcheesi, Donny Osmond
album

i’d get to invite over
a special friend
for the night

i’ve had three surprise parties —

in Hawaii - friend dropped off early
so everyone had to come to the door
“Surprise!”
My Aunt & Uncle smack in the middle
i’d talk eventually!
strawberry daiquiris and cake

at forty, thought i was braver,
handled the screams...
but my collegiate son
called me on the phone,
“i want to come home.”
“Why? When.”
He yells from downstairs,
“How ‘bout now.”
i cried a river on his shoulder.
you see..we had gotten a call
the previous week that he was run over
by a truck...turned out to be only his toe,
thank the Lord, for that!

at fifty, it’s no secret what they’re going to do
but this year i know the date and the battle
my mom’s going through - she may not be coming
i guess it depends on what happens Friday

God, so far, has blessed me with sixty birthdays
and two parents who have lived this long

to tell me my stories and i carry theirs
as far as i can,
a candle in hand

my wish
for my family’s health and happiness

and yours too!

10/7/2020
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Radhakrishna Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 2:24 AM
Sixty club! me too! looking forward to early next year to retirement and travel!! Happy birthday!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 5:44 AM
Hope it all goes to plan and you enjoy abundant years. Have routine and goals for home and elsewhere. Be blessed in every way!
Watt Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 9:34 PM
KIM! Welcome to the 60 club, a club I joined last December. I hope you enjoyed your "Beddian birthday" (born in '60, turning 60). Lovely poem, my friend. Wishing you many happy returns of the day ~ John
Rodrigues Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 5:42 AM
Thanks, John! I hadn’t heard that before. Jost wrote a little tanka using the word...thanks to you. <3
One Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 8:37 AM
Oh wow, I didnt think you were that old.. A lovely poem with beautiful thoughts..
Rodrigues Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 5:10 AM
I’m sixty years young ;) Thank you, Silent!
Faulkner Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 7:01 PM
I am having a milestone birthday soon, so I am glad you have had so many happy birthdays and am wishing you many happy more!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 4:35 AM
Thank you, Michelle! Happy early birthday to you!
Cunningham Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 2:57 PM
Happy Birthday Kim, I hope its good news on Friday for you and your family. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 4:33 PM
Thank you, Tom, on both points!
Wolf Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 2:55 PM
May God bless you with 60 more, all in good health, Kim. Keep the candles lit, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 4:34 PM
What will my 120 birthday poem look like ;) Thank you, Gershon!
Proxenos Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 9:14 AM
Hi Kim, belated and happy birthday wishes my friend. Each birthday we have is a bonus - the bible says three score years and ten, but we all hope we will go further when we reach that age. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 4:35 PM
Thank you, Jennifer! We are blessed with each day!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 9:05 AM
I've learned to appreciate my parents more now that they are gone. And I suppose having had my 80th birthday this month, I might as well think of what's next. May your parents live long, happy and healthy. God bless you all. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 4:46 PM
Happy Birthday to you, Victor! I love my parents more and more. Thank you for the blessing, dear friend! Health and happiness to you!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 4:39 PM
Happy Birthday to you, Victor! I love my parents more and more. Thank you for the blessing, dear friend! Health and happiness to you!
Fowler Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 8:08 AM
Touching Kim. Another wonderful write Kim. I think you never run out of words to entice the mind. Linda
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 4:40 PM
Thank you, Linda! You are sweet!
La France Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 8:06 AM
Kim, this is absolutely a beautiful and wonderful poem, you are one amazing poet (and Happy Birthday too) _Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 4:41 PM
You are so sweet, Constance! Thank you for birthday wishes!
Pandit Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 7:53 AM
Happy Birthday, Kim. Much joy to you and your family on this special day. Blessings!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 4:45 PM
Thank you so much! May God bless you and yours, sweet friend!
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