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Six On Me

i'm cool till i get sober

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Robin L. Gass

Date: 12/28/2008 9:01:00 PM

Awesome write. Very clever and rings with truth for many! Happy New Year! Love, Robin

Daver Austin

Date: 12/10/2008 6:11:00 AM

Short, but oh so true. Love, daver

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/10/2008 4:55:00 AM

good one, simple, fast, no brain work at all, i like it, and about the derrick loves poetry thats to get people to read my stuff, not the members but the ones who are not members and still read poetry, example there 2,342 people are line when i wrote this comment.

Constance La France

Date: 12/9/2008 12:25:00 PM

short and gripping is six on me... as to my crazy christmas carol poem.. bad Mommy is all I have to say.. ...thanks for your comment... constance

Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/9/2008 9:26:00 AM

Then your hot temper boils over...love this write.

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 12/9/2008 4:57:00 AM

Hehe...I liked it:) Loved the humor....Loved it. You are such a sweet soul. Happy holidays:) Love, Chitra

John Rhinem

Date: 12/8/2008 4:48:00 PM

Smile-yep, that's you! But at least your honest Brother! Actually, a little humor is always good sometimes, within some things!? "Happy Holidays Brother-Don't drink too much of that egg nog now-smile-"Warmth & Love To All You Love, John!:)

Sara Lokken

Date: 12/8/2008 2:53:00 PM

That sounds like a paradox, lol---but a funny one! Best wishes, Sara

Christy Hardy

Date: 12/8/2008 2:05:00 PM

Ummm, be careful....you fill this site with so many blessings....always, Christy

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/8/2008 2:04:00 PM

lol, great six-word bio, John. I like it, and good luck in the contest! ~Juliane